OS: Little things I wish I saw...

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Samaira

@ArShiFever.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Awesome...Loved It..Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Loved it! simply loved it!

U have brought out Khushi's pain and Arnav's realisation so beautifully.
Plz do Pm me whenever u update the next parts...

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Heeba

@Heeba

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

How i wish i could see this on tv... Even with this shetal track they could have done soo much...

Beautifully written, loved all the parts... Do continue soon :)

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Just read all 4 parts together. Awesome story and idea. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Am really loving this story by OS's...good to see Arnav has noticed Khushi's pain and will now do something about it!!!!!

Thanks for pm

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

already commented, but I had to say again I can't wait to read the next part!!!!😃😃😃

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Aap Update kab karengi !!!!!

Cant Wait anymore ...

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

amazing os dear

loved them all

do continue soon

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Hi,

Thanx for pm and sry but I just got now the time to read all parts. Each part is written superbly. Is there any fifth part? If yes, let me know as I'm excited, what will happen after Arnav saw blood drops on the floor.