OS: Little things I wish I saw... - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..what a place to stop at...

cant you continue sooner...

come on..!...

this is such a bad point to stop at.!!.. :( :( :( :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cant explain you how muhc glad I'm for having come across these Os's! I've been shattering day by day watching what all is happening in the show. How Khushi is become more of a mockery in front of Sheetal .. How Arnav is taking her for granted.. How he's failing to see through her.. and so much more. My angst, anger and frustration is reaching extremities.

How can a person who claims to love you so much makes you feel so .. unwanted? It's really like she's an intruder when the trio(Arnav-Aarav-Sheetal) are together. Arnav knows Khushi had doubts on his relationship with Aarav and still he's failing to see behind the mask that she puts up efficiently for all! This is so unfair. (I would also like to question CVs that how much time does it take to get a home in Delhi? For God's sake! that Sheetal has almost made RM her home. At least be a little realistic with the storyline.. )

This storyline has made me cry like anything. It's a shame to see what a joke they're making of Khushi... She's crazy or bubbly or cheerful self that doesn't mean you make her act like a plain lunatic! Whatever happened to the justification of characters? And then the way that Arnav reacts to all this is more appalling. It's like he is indeed embarrassed, sometimes. What have they done to the show?! 😭

I cant wait for this Sheetal to be out. She's worse than Shyam crap. 😡 If nothing else, I expect Arnav to act sharp for a change now!

Considering how am feeling about the show, am sure it might give you an idea how much I loved these OS. I really want Khushi to leave Arnav once (or at least on the verge of it) so that he realizes what he has got! She can not always keep getting hurt like this. He might be sensible for the world but where does his sense vanishes off when it comes to his relationships, esp with Khushi? He realizes, every time, too late.

I can't wait for you to continue this. I like how Arnav is sensible here to see things now. Its better late than never.

-V-
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Posted: 12 years ago
thts really one of the most emotional and poweerful update... i literally cried while reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update plzzz...I'm literaly stalking it every hour...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kushi's pain really heart wrenching.
awesome piece of writing pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow .. Amazing yaar ...
I am speechless ...

U really did it this time ... I am weeping like nothing ... Man . Me weeping ... Shit ..

Continue soon ...

Every single thing u have written is so touchy .. Tht I feel tht someone is squeezing my heart with their bare hands ...

Xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
All these parts have been so beautifully written...pls continue soon coz Arnav really needs to get his act together and start taking care of her for a change.
Khushi's torment was written so so beautifully...we can feel her pain.
Why cant they depict it like this in the show too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god its too good...
u decribed kushi emotions very well ...
And arnavs feel for kushi ...thank god hehas a concern for her feel ..
even n serial the fotgot to show ...
i cryed a lot ...
U just brought the emotions of kushi very welll ...
brilliant...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's sad to c Khushi going this emotional torture just because of sheetal, looking forward to the next part, add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful writing and storyline!!! Please let me know when the next installment of the story is posted!!!

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