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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 12 years ago

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paawani

@NotKidding

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

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will read n Comment..!

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Simply Awesome...Superbly Written..😊

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vaughn

@vaughn

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG! You are making me cry😭 and I am a grown woman fully knowing that it is a ficticious character. It was beautifully written. Thank you. PLEASE let Arnav realize his mistake and SLAP Shital!!!😆😆😆

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

there you go

making me cry again

not fair sunara

I am trying my best to not feel any pain in this track

to forget khushi;s pain

But buddy

your awesome writing just tells me

That this is how it should be

this is what should be shown

This is PAIN

Raw and intense

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

This made me cry so much, these OS series are really hitting right to my heart,

it's simply amazing,

I'm speechless, and I'm loving them, and how you are expressing Khushi's pain and writing these scenes CVs need to show this, u should send them these OSes they would have been wonderful episodes!

love love love these oses and as each one passes I can't help but get excited when the confrontation between Arnav and Khushi happens, I really hope u write the next part soon! super excited 😃

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zillionaire

@zillionaire

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

omg!! i feel like crying myself! :(

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Jaya Devi

@Aphrodite88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Atleast in your writing i can satisfy myself that arnav understands khushi!
u always make my heart wrench up and cry...:-(
how do u do it?
dont you cry when u are writing it?
yet u do...brilliant!!!

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Really nice, though I doubt if he would do any of those things where she is concerned as he is too busy with his ex and kid!

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

your os's are brilliant. really. i've read all 4 till now. and each one just as good as the other. the emotions and the pain/anguish not just of khushi's but also of arnavs that you've captured is almost tangible. i love it. it brings back memories of what it use to be. thanks! cannot wait to read more.

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

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beautiful...awww my khushi...i wish her pain to vanish soon.

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