Dark Sleep * The Unfortunate Deaths * - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesome part

loved it to the core

nice n different concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Loved it.. Bt why that man is cursing thm??? Did Kriya see this happening in her dream?? I'm damn confused..

Update the nxt part soon and thanx 4 the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
WOw sTory of 10 frns...
and chapter was awesome but Rey n kria are nt in same room kria gets bad dreams and she shouts and poor sharon cant handle d weight...😆😆😆
NYCC but update sooon yeh chappy bhi u ended at a cliff😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
itz awesum but hell confusing..!! update soon so dat v knw more..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Wow new work 👍🏼...
Prologue was interesting 😊...

All the characters were amazing 😃..
Kriyansh married , that's great...
Kria can see the future , that's different ...
Swaron also married n Sharon pregnant , they are fast 😉...
All the other characters were also interesting ...

The first part was nice 😃...
Really superb start...
Ending was a bit scary ...
That man cursed them , "Death" that is something new...

Really loved it Nimi ❤️...
N take care Sista 😊.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
It was so interesting ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
wonderful start :)
pls.. Pls. Kriyaansh ko maarna mat !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
its awesome nimmi...loved it to the core...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
sowieee m late!!
exams...U knw UTs nd all dos killer FAs! 🤢
phew!!
d concept is damn intriguing!! 👏
I love it!
Nd dos new characters😎...hmmm gna be fun nd mysterious too!
Abhi to Im worried abt Kriya nd her dream...! Nd accident?? D person who died was d one who was trolled by lucky...kuch to gadbad h!!
wna read it further...ASAP!
Update soon! I'll be waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 2


She came back to normal after a leap of 5 days.. "Phewww ! I just hate that dream!" she sighed and came out of the guest room.. "Ermmm! after ages I woke up before him.." she thought and headed to the kitchen.."I m hungry!" she said out loud holding her tummy.. "Me too! Hell hungry u knw!" someone from behind her said…

She turned back in shock.. there he was standing in his shorts.. messy hairs and a cute smile… "Thinking about me baby?" he asked winking.. "No ! Absolutely no! I was thinking about Daniel!" she grinned looking at his face which turned into red … "Oh ! something is burning.. let me see!" she said making a O face and started searching in fridge, oven, on stove and many more places..

"Stop it ok!" he said getting irriated.. "Nah let me see na!" she went to him start checking near him.. then on him and then brushing his hairs.. "STOP IT!" he said holding her hands and then pinnig her to the fridge near by.. She was shocked… she stared at him in shock… He came near her in anger trying to scare the hell out of her.. "I.. i.. m…so..sorry!" she gulped hard as the need of each other between them was again growing after 6 months..

In these months, they controlled badly.. she was the one not letting him come closer.. she always thought that she wasn't perfect for him.. the thing rey told them was wrong.. he didn't want anyone else to know that from past 6 months, they never touched each other.. what will they think of them? That's why both were dying to touch but never got the chance..

He wrapped his hands around her and pulled her closer… her 1 hand was on his shoulder and the other on she opened her mouth to say something when he cut her off.. "No ways ! today I m not gonna control anymore!" he said moving closer.. the moment he was just inches away, the stove get on and her fingers got burned.. she screamed in pain.. he let go off her and asked. "What happened?" .. she showed him her fingers.. he saw that the stove was off… he lightly touch it but it was cold instead of hot..

They both were quiet from past an hour.. she got a call from Daniel.. she picked up saying "Hey Daniel!" rey looked at her instantly and made a face.. he snatched her cell and turned on the loudspeaker.. "Hey Sweetu! Wassup?" he asked her.."Nothing much.. burned my finger .. lol" she giggled.. "WHAT? are you serious? I mean really? You burned you finger and you are saying lol?" he said with a stern tune.. rey was just making a straight face listening to them..

"Calm down Daniel.. I m fine.. u say.. why u called?" "Oh ! You know what? Ermmm something weird in happening with me.. like when I was in gym.. some dumbbells from the shelf fell on me.. Thanks god a guy saved me by pushing me out of there.." he said hesitating.. "Same here u knw! Ermmm bye Daniel.. I will talk to you later.. I m having headache now!" she cut the call passed a look at rey who was in his own world..

Then she got a call from laila.. "Kriyaaa I m so so so happy.. I m going for movie .. do you wanna come?" she asked excitingly lightening kriya's mood… "Oh laila of unknown majnu.. calm down babes.. look I cant come because of my headache.." she said sadly.. "Its ok darling.. don't spoil your mood my littly littly kriya.. you know what? I love you like anything.. you are so precious to me! Promise me you will not leave me ever?" she asked and kriya giggled.. "Enough of your buttering.. I promise.." kriya said happily while laila said bye and cut the call as she was late for the movie..

She drifted off too sleep..after two hours , she woke up with a jolt yelling laila's name.. rey came in her room to check her.. "What happened?" he asking concerned.. "I want to go on linder street right now!" she ordered and ran to the car in sleeping suit.. both reached the street but were too late.. laila was on lying on the street in fully in blood… just then a car passed over her.. her state was hell bad.. her bones were cracked and she wasn't in a state that anyone can have a look..

"LAILA!" kriya shouted her name.. she gulped hard and closed her eyes shut tight while rey hugged her tight with tears.. laila was still breathing.. rey left kriya and headed towards laila when a street light broke and fell on her.. and now she was totally dead.. kriya fell unconscious and rey called swayam.. "Swayam.. where..are you?" he said sobbing.. "I m in hospital dude.. Sharon is here for some checkups!" he said normally.. Rey told him everything.. When rey turned towards laila's body, there was no one there.. he didn't get what was happening..


This is for now Guyz.. hope u liked it..

I m happy with your response.. Hope you guyz will like whatever i write :)

With lots of love..

-Urs Devil.

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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