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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guyz !

Yup ! m again here... with my pending works for which you guyz are gonna kill me :)

But bare with me ! i hope i always reach your expectations.. :)

i dont have that good writing skills but still i m so happy that i got readers like you ! *except some who never tried to like or comment :/ *

i will just give you the Prologue .. and then Character Sketch..

Hope you guyz will like it :)

Prologue

10 Best friends..

All from different professions..

The thing which hooked them is a place..

Their place..

1 business man !

who changed their lives…

What will happen?

How and when?

Who will survive and who will not?

Their Destiny is DEATH !

Hope you guyz will like it ..

Hit the like button and do comment :)

-Urs Devil

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Index !

Prologue *Up*

Character Sketch

Chapter 1

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

For New Readers !

This isnt my 1st work as u can read up!

if u like this one, i think u will absolutely like my other works !

I will soon create my Gallery so that it would be easy for u and me :)

if u want to read my any other work, do pm me :)

Pms

For pms, plz add Nimmi_Devil in your buddy list ;)

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres

interesting story...

yet confusing

n that businessman who changes their lives...

continue soon😊

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Yippy 😃
Finally.. A horror flick!!
Was waitin since d day u tld me abt it n now its here!!
Concept itself is full of suspenses.. Place.. A business man who changed thr life!

Waitin fr d CS n further parts!
Mata.. Jldi update kriyo!

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Halloween ka asar hua hai tujpe lagta hai...lol

fab prologue cnt soon

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

looks very interesting !
update soon ..!

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey nice starting.. 10 ppl, 1 bussinesman..and ooohh... death.. I likey.. :D wondering how the story moves forward..wanna read it.. but need to soon leave IF :( .. khair..till then will follow it.. :D

-shreya and kanishtha.

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
Yippy 😃
Finally.. A horror flick!!
Was waitin since d day u tld me abt it n now its here!!
Concept itself is full of suspenses.. Place.. A business man who changed thr life!

Waitin fr d CS n further parts!
Mata.. Jldi update kriyo!

I knew you will be waiting impatiently :)

dont call me MATA !

ab school kal se start hoing..

God knows what will i do!

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -shenz-
res

unres
interesting story...

yet confusing

n that businessman who changes their lives...

continue soon😊

Yah yah !

i knw hell confusing :)

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