Dark Sleep * The Unfortunate Deaths * - Page 11

that was hell interesting...

lved it

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

that was hell interesting...

lved it

Itne dino baad found ur comment first..

wow... the end was interesting...

I wanna read further...

jaldi uodate kar...

abhi pls...

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Yeh kya tha?

Update or kya?

Originally posted by: -shenz-

wow... the end was interesting...

I wanna read further...

jaldi uodate kar...

abhi pls...

Subah se kamp kamp k likh rahi !

Awsome chapter !
Loved it !
Very interesting !
Update soon d next part !

dude its hell scary...having goosebumps rite now...

Great update
Aww I hate deaths but this one was scary
Thnx 4 da pm

Haila..
So it has started.. Kriya woke up aftr long 5days.. Hohh.. Poor Reyaansh.. :(
Wonder.. Y she feels tht she dun worth Reyaansh.. 😲
So this is y.. They sleep in diff rooms.. U turned d story really well..
Reyaansh.. Hah he's so so understandin.. He dint evn tell his bst buddies abt dis.. Instead he's waitin..!!
True love !!

Loved d kitchen part.. Reyaansh anger scared kriya to death.. Loved thr eagerness to touch each othr.. To feel d warmth..!! Bt ye kya.. Gas ka stove khud e on ho gya.. 😕
Kriya ka fingers jal gya bt when Reyaansh chckd.. It was off n cold

Thr Daniel.. He too got saved!!
I loved d jealous Reyaansh.. (only when he's jealous fr kriya)...
Loved dat part.. Haha !! 😆

Bt Laila 😭 😭
She died tht too dis way.. Now dat was scary.. Car crossed ovr her n thn d street light fell on her 😕
Kriya saw it in her dream bt she was late.. Laila aint more bt her body.. Wea it vanished Laila askd kriya to b wid her always n here she herself lft kriya :(:(

Wana c evryone's reaction... Hufff
Aage kya hoga.. :/


Mtlb tm ne soch e liya h tht tm darane vali ho buri tarah.. Haila!!

Brilliantly written nim!
Ur truely a gem as a writer.. U cn write evry genre.. Hats off!!

Loved it.. Waitin fr d nxt part.. Update soon..

Ok...that was sooo amazzingg!!!