MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 21

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update

loved it lods

Beautifully written

loved it to d coreee

loved Mayank here sooo very much!!!

n felt bad again for Nupur...

it seems she had a very Painful n Dark past as its related to her fmaily too...Sigh!!!

the way Dreamily she talked abt having a brother n Mayank's mom it seemed like that..sigh!

want to know that soon..

n OMG!!!!!!!!!! 50 servants????? 😲😆🤣 sare moholle ke liye hain kya 🤣

n woa!!! so Mayank's dad is also a eww type man..sigh!

bt m loving the way Mayank is behaving with her...

he is Actually a Nice soul..Sigh!

so the Reality hurts! n it hit to soon..sigh!

well...i sooo loved d way Mayank cared abt her

i was totally Awww-ed with him...

i wish Mayank wud soon give Nupur a tight n soothing hug...Sigh!

loved it lodsss

loved it to d coreee

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alo dear
glad u liked it..
there are many things attached to them...
he is Sharma.. wht he think he is ... he has to much at his legecy

mayank's father cuming up
hmm u just want a hug.. i was planning sumthing else... chalo us ko edit ker day ty hain

thnks alot dear
updating soon

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

sory for not unresing my prev comnt.
will unres both soon.

chapter 6: it was an awsom part .loved mayanks confident in dis update .n he understood dat y nupur was rude wid him dat day .loved it n loved d way he expressd his feelings .one month wid nupur .its gonna give dem pleasure n pain at d same time .even while making pleasure n sweet memories for dem dey will knew it wll end soon .its like a dream only .gosh a tough decission taken by mayank but i know FARY TALE hai tto sa thik hohi jayega . so m just gonna enjoy d roler coster ride 😃


its oky dear...
thanks alot for liking it and now u know wht he felt about all this... true i so love the fact that ur geting the point .. it will not just be pleasure tht it will hold... lol... he has made not only himself but her too in to soup.. n ya .. its me n than its a fare tale... yet this month will end... but enjy the ride

chapter :7

haye haye its such a sweet update .loved mayank's care for nupur .does he know dat he is head over hill in love n nupur who is not usd to love ,respect n care too will helplessly fall for him .i was confusd dat y mayu wants to share his room wid her n when saw he actually NEED NOTHING i was relieved but more dan dat i looked inside nupur . how much emotionaly she will feel for him who has never known dat a guy living in same room wid a girl can keep physical distance . n when he applied oinment .phew NUPUR IS GONE CASE now

even if he knows tht... do u think he will belive in the fact that he is love.. with his mis judgment previoulsy he will take more than required time to actually let himself belive about it
i just can give u a tight bear hug for the fact .. the perfect fact tht u looked inside nupur n mayank.. so loved u for tht... nupur is going case more n more

i can understand what nupur is feeling . loved dis para

he is wht he is.. he doesn't have to be wht he isn't.. but soon she will get tired of appearing all that she isn't.. and in few days at times she will behave as herself.. and with that there will be realties he might not be able to take in.. he isn't aware of the cruelties of the world.. and the bruises she has on herself.. are hard to take in. but than its just for a month'and maybe she will cope with it.

u have expressd her emotion ,her reality so beautifully .true she z pure from her idology but her nature ,her habit has became used to dat filthy life . n no matter how she hate dat life now dats her reality .coming out of dat is not easy or dat may kill her own identity ...

the fact that this ff i have based it in Newyork n Seattle tht is america.. will give me more space to acceptance as far as the big picture is concern.. but things tht he has to know are the major issues

thanks alot dear for liking it n loving it..
im so in love wih the fact tht with each update u can see through right insight them.. it gives me so much pleasure...

thanku so much

Originally posted by: Maria.

Very Nice part

Loved it

Continue soon:)

thanks alot dear

btw have u forgotten abt Will love u forever... i m waiting for tht

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Awesome part...

Mayank was fighting himself what's happening let it happen..

not worry wether it is right or wrong...

Loved the way he tried to justify himself...

yup thts wht he is thinking just take it the way it is.. how long he can we just need to see...

Beautifull you had shown their respective P.O.V.'s...

How Did Nupur get mark on her neck...

IT was very painfull..

not her body but her soul is also deeply wounded will Mayank would her ointment..

will Mayank save her from ever wound...

thanks alot dear
hmm... how she got that on her neck is sumthing tht i cant explain in words... it was during are one night with a man that she got bruised ... now understnd understand

Well let's see...

But i want Nupur to express herself infront of Mayank..want Nupur to express her wounds ,her pain to him , it will help her...it will strengthen the bond between them...

it will take time alot of that.. more than time it will need alot more to it... she isnt sure of wht to do .. its just a month dear...

thnks for liking it

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Awesome Update !!!

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Lovely part di...u r so good whn wrting convos..i like mayur convo
Continue soon.

thanku so much
hey glad u felt that way.. thanku so much...
before GMYH i was a full on convo writer... so tht sumhwere is near to me...

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
nupur's dark past don't leave them soon..hope they both handle it together with patience ..cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanku so much

they have to live with it.. to handle it...
yes ur right they need patience..

thnks alot

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

very very nice and lovely update

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

beautiful update loved it

thanku so much

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome update..

Loved mayUr's dinner part..

Aww..Mayank cooks for his mother on her birthday and mother's day..that's so sweet of him...

What bruise was on Nupur's back???

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

thanks alot dear

he is sweet...
thanks dear for liking it...

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

gosh i jst luved it...
osumm

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Faria.

Cascade

Another a beautiful and warm full update

Hmmm loved the fight b/w heart and mind of Maynk'

And u know what- hehehee I loved when his heart addressed nupur as Mayanks wife..

thanks alot jani..

glad u liked it

lol... i loved it to.. the fact that he is seeking sumthing like tht in her...

Very sweet, cute and touchy update..

GOSH I loved the way mayu was taking care of Nupur'

This concern, companionship, closeness everything was very new to NUPUR.. She wasn't used to it. Though she was strong and practical but still she was very fragile and delicate. she fared to feel like normal people. Bcoz the life she is leading now has no place for emotion. And she knew it.She was damn scared bcoz if she get attracted by those affection then she may not b able to control herself in future.

tht is so true.. u define her so welll... tht is wht she is fearing for all this month and around mayank...

The ointment part was sooo touchy that I cant explain u. even I want to kill that Man(or I can say Inhuman) who hurt her in this way. U know my heart ached while I read this part. It was amazing part.

Sighhh my Mayur is the best' I loved my mayank nupur here

Fabulous part jani

Keep it up

Try to update soon

do we ever think about them as human.. the s** workers... so why the people who have no ehtics tht they go to such ones will think abt them like tht.. its like buying n seeling deal...
thanks alot dear gald u liked it

and yes i m back ..
n i was so waiting for ur rply of my cell msg...please do so... please... else i will send tht on the address i have asked u to confirm
love ya

Originally posted by: Sara92.

Nice

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Ria..

Fantastic update
loved it so much

thanku so much

Originally posted by: tasnim.

Apii very beautiful part
awesome

thanu so much

Originally posted by: drmaha

omg its beauty...

mayank cares for her lovely... he startd developing deelings for her ...wow cant wat for the next update..

but i wobder deep wound on nupurs neck how?

thanksa lot dear
galdu liked it tht much

he has feelings for her... pretty much

aray meri sari green bachy..
will tell tht in note