FF|Arhi|Th4 How IPK should've been[ch22sc3 pg102 - Page 18

Originally posted by: segad

really nice working update. lots of happenings

the bagecha touch was nice. can almost see it happening.

btw, "welcome home, khushi" is 3 words not 4.

the banker bit was good too.

curious about what akash has put in her bag.

still a bit worked up about 101 letters so can't write much

Originally posted by: asr13

I knew it Seema ...3 words not 4 ...I knew you'll pick it up, which is why just didnt mention it 🤣

Originally posted by: smitzy

ya okay okay.. I had added another letter "A" in the note but then edited it out at the last minute isiliye 3 ka 4 hi reh gaya.. but changed it now

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PS - I'm glad you people read it this closely 😆

Originally posted by: Punkin22

Amazing update. Arnav's giving flowers was touching. I like how you explained each emotion in different houses. Shyam is on Arnav's target now, and look forward to Shyam's suffering. Look forward to next update...

Originally posted by: pup03

Awesome !!! feels nice to read how IPK should have been...as here you have maintained the characters so nicely...arnav is business tycoon here and is always shown how with his shatir business senses he overcomes every problem...also khushi is same...however the PH, CV's should learn from you all the people who are writing and how you guys maintain the consistency of the characters and do not kill them everyday...sorry for outburst just sad 😭 with what is happening with the show these days...felt back for ARSHI characters which are been killed every day 😡 by the so called PH, CV's...Thanks for pm. 😊

Originally posted by: merit

Yes I was stalking. 😈

I liked the way you juxtaposed their thoughts during their rides back home. Both taking stock of the ever-changing dynamics in their relationship. God these two are complicated. Though Khushi's doubts about Arnav are justified; he's hurt her too many times for her not to be wary of him.

The 'bageecha' in the Gupta living room was a nice touch. ASR is overwhelming, both in his hate and his love, and you kept that in mind. Also it kinda reminded me of that epi where he had covered RM's living room in roses, to patao his irate wife. I prefer to forget what happened next, but that hug remains one of my personal favourites.😳

Loved the family's (non)reaction as well. & Buaji's running commentary on sanak. This is what loving families do to the difficult ones amongst them. Really.😆

I am waiting to see what's in that box. Guessing it's that red saree from Lucknow.

& Shyam will soon come knocking, isn't it? I really hope he sees something in those cameras which will traumatise him for life. Like a close-shot of Laxmi relieving herself. 😃 But seriously, what a creep!!!

Umm, did I warn you that I write really looong comments?? 'Coz I do.😛

Originally posted by: asr13

Smita !!!!

Jump back to business haan? sach mein !👏

I loooved the way you described their turmoil, one after another, in exactly similiar situations ...made me help understand the two idiots slightly better ...I myself didn't have an answer to Arnav's question ...why is she avoiding him ? ...I actually had to go back and re-read your scene with Khushi and her monologues with Devi Maiyya earlier on ...

The rose-ka-overdose was a very cute ...Welcome home Khushi, indeed !😳 ...and loved that she wouldn't let anyone broom it, utha ke sab apne room mein le gayee ...awww !😳😃 My heart went out to her today ...awww !!!🤗

Sankadevi and Sankeshwar ..aur unki ajeeb si mahaSanak ...indeed !

I am quite restless after reading this, why do I feel that Khushi is not going to go running in his arms as he expects, if he expects that, that is !

We don't know yet what the gift entails, but how typical of Arnav Singh Raizada to not be able to figure out why she is avoiding him !!!!😲 Men, I tell you ...sorry if I sound sexist here ..I really don't care !

Everything is not 2+2=4 , right and not everything thing can be repaired by "fixing" it ...

Ek toh i don't know how can you be so bloody convincing about each and every character ya😲

...first, we wanted Arnav to redeem, and redeem big time ..hell and back ..I remember 😛...

...Then, awww Arnav ...bechara ...him crying on Anji's lap, Epic apology to Garima .. Amma ... apology to Khushi ...and Bang! I swapped parties, was completely on his side ... ab maan bhi jao Khushi types ... he accepts he screwed up big time, and he is willing to do anything and everything to win you back ...come on girl, don't play hard to get now !!! ...

...then, his confidence , his sexy smirk, his being too sure of himself, his not being able to understand that you can't go from A to E, without B-C-D, his not being able to understand that the effect he has on her physically is not everything...not something she can hold on to when she is unsure of the stability ... when she is insecure ..and insecure she is ! ... not enough ...

...and I don't even know how to react now...honestly ... bloody restless ...😕

Oh trust you to play with the emotions of your readers sweetie, you are sooo wicked, I tell you !!!😲😆

Loving it and the not-so-straightfroward LoveStory with your tadka ...was it ever meant to be simple haan ?😉

Brilliant !!!!👏

PS - I know I am steering clear of the Creep, but dont like the idea of Anji willingly funding him 😕, waise bhi meri sui kahan atakti hai you know that !😉😆