I don't know whhy i'm saying this, but honestly yo're a horrible, wiked person. I'm sitting here on the end of my chair with my head in the air thinking of the arious possibilities. You're taking the cliff hanger business really seriously and making us all wait so eagerly. In saying that i do agree you are one of the best writers getting us to wait for you to update next.
The paralelling of Arnav's and Khushi's flashbacks is really good. I had conflicting emotions of who's side i was on then i realised in the end the sides are going to be the same anyway. Although Arnav has finally realised that it won't be easy to gain her trust again, it seems like he's on the verge of nearly giving up, going by my intuition if he is going to give up he would go ouot with a bang. You know like overwhelm her and then just back off. However at the same time, the determination of him never giving up on her was quite evident when he publicly admitted he was wrong and since he has gotten of his high horse maybe he will do all the things he wouldn't have done as ASR.
Payal and Akash really cute and supportive. I liked how Khushi finally expresses her gratitude to Akash, the emotions however are somewhat implied at Arnav. And Akash reinforcing that Arnav would have done the same shows the support for his brother's mission.
I smelt trouble in the past few updates where the banker kept being put off so here it is i suppose. I'm kinda curious about what Shyam is upto now since Dadi has left and that was kinda his rook, waiting for his master stroke.
It's great to see Buaji, i absolutely adore her. Just the wa she comments on things is just so unique. "the house is like a garden" She's just brilliant. I would love to have a situation of Mamiji and Buaji in one room alone, that would be some comic brilliance.
Amma and Bauji: Can't wait for them to play more pivotal roles. Amma has welcomed Arnav back with open arms and can't wait for her to have the talk with Khushi to give up on her high resolve and start thinking about how long will she stay that way and how long can she stay away from Arnav. Waiting for Bauji to talk some sense into Khushi.
Saying all this, i beleive that Khushi's anger and refusal so justified, and she has every right to remain that way. However Arnav will never be able to make it up to her unless she gives him the chance, which she is unwilling to do. But looks like she's going to melt in his love, after she realises the intentions of his recent actions and the extent to which he's trying to win her back. If they do have a future together i can see her being doubtful about and reluctant to accept his advances.
Wow didnt realise that this was going to to end up being such a long comment. It was really an amzing update and i haven't really commented for a while and i only recently discovered this FF. Hopefully you will update soon.
Love Sushi
PS: I'm sorry if i started being ontradictory, i get told that when i write too much i contradict myself. But honestly i felt so many mixed emotions.
PPS: i'm sorry for call you horrible you truly are a wonderful person and a great writer (that people like me abuse to get more writing out)
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