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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

I demand you update although I may not be able to read it (exam tomorrow :p) but I saw the episode and I am so irritated right now! I need the proper IPKKND, so please update! :/

I second this ...verrry irritated after today's episode !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sony1990

hey it looked like a filler but really good one😊 loved how arnav sat next to her on plane and specially where he thought with her sleeping beside he dint eve think of his laptop ...waitig for next scene ...r u going to get shyam back i action now?

really want some sweet romantic moments between them


Oooh yeah, we can't stay away from the bad guy for too long can we 😉 Shyam will come at the opportune time which shouldn't be long if everything I have planned goes well.. sweet moments uhm I can't promise anything but will try my best 😉

cheers!

Originally posted by: panck

Fantastic flow from one scene to another
Cute plane scene/convo, could totally imagine Khushi talking about safety measures, flying and water..
Loved how she turned the tables on him and stated that she wasn't avoiding him at all. Great going Khushi..
Cannot wait for the showdown, for some reason Arnav's smirk is bugging me.


thank you dear! 😊 to tell you the truth, his smirk is bugging me too hehehe but then trust Khushi to put him right at his place hahahaha
stay tuned! 😉

Originally posted by: koyel.c

Awesome update... awaiting impatiently for the next update... shall we all raise a pitition to the PH for making you the original cv... then no other serial would be alive for competating and not a single character of IPKKND would be leaving the show for the absence of their screen space...


thanks koyel! I see you commented finally 😊 aww I'm flattered with your words really.. thank you so much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Loved it, trapped between the window and Arnav! Would love to trade places with her...

And loved how he forgot he had his laptop with him...ooh waiting for the conversations their confessions and their chemistry!


hahaha we all would love to trade places darling 😉 thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: pup03

Awesome !!! finally in delhi...now arnav will have to find ways to meet khushi so that he can convince her...and his sister will be there to help him always...😃 thanks of pm...😊

are you sure his sister will be there always? hmmm wait for the upcoming scenes is all I'll say 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


Oooh yeah, we can't stay away from the bad guy for too long can we 😉 Shyam will come at the opportune time which shouldn't be long if everything I have planned goes well.. sweet moments uhm I can't promise anything but will try my best 😉

cheers!


thank you dear! 😊 to tell you the truth, his smirk is bugging me too hehehe but then trust Khushi to put him right at his place hahahaha
stay tuned! 😉


thanks koyel! I see you commented finally 😊 aww I'm flattered with your words really.. thank you so much!! 🤗


hahaha we all would love to trade places darling 😉 thanks for commenting!

are you sure his sister will be there always? hmmm wait for the upcoming scenes is all I'll say 😉

Ms Writer ...aaj toh spoilers ki heavvvy baarish hui gawa hai !!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Uff Arnav, when you had a chance to speak why didn't you?!?! So annoying but the long flight from Lucknow to Delhi with Arshi sitting together was worth it. Hayye!

Arnav, one thing you planned right na...getting Akash and NK in the plan to ensure Khushi has to sit with you. Khushi was so cute and funny with her antics..."Are they gonna land the plane in river Ganges?" and her seat belt dilemma😆 This and her sleeping gave us Rabba ve moments. I am so in love with Arnav's eyes...lucky girl!

The exchange between Arnav and Anjali is very consistent to the progress he is making to redeem himself. Bas, agar dil ki baat bolta jab Khushi ni poocha toh it would've been much better😵 I know you have something in store for us, something that will leave us breathless! 😊😳

Till the next update😊


Thanks for the lovely comment Khadija!! 😊 oh yes, breathless update will be up in the next chapter.. abhi chill karo 😊

cheers darling!

Originally posted by: Kurup

The entire 45 minute journey was spent by rsting her head on his shoulder...This was reallly sweeet...I ought to check my sugar level after reading the flight journey...


hahaha I was hogging on ice cream when I writing, hence the extra sweetness.. waise I am not all that great in writing fluff 😆
cheers!

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

Amazing scene! 😃
I love how Arnav is around Khushi in this update. The gentle brushes here and there. The way he made sure Khushi's head was in a comfortable position on the flight. Him asking her on more than one occasion if she was ok. All these little things mean a lot. Shows a sweet and caring side to the usual Laad Governor 😆


thanks dear!! yes we all know he loves her and is growing to be the sweet caring guy that we see in excess in the reel life.. balance is very important I feel 😊

cheers and thank you for the lovely comment!

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

update...wow

so arnav purposely did this arrangement...lolzz so its all going to be fine...they are back in delhi...and things are soon going to be right on track...
thank for pm:)


oh yes.. Arnav is very shatir when he wants to be.. I like to keep my Arnav with brains, thank you very much 😆 yes they are back in delhi.. where DHAMAKA awaits them!! 😊
cheers!

Originally posted by: arnavbarun

really nice update!!!


why is she avoiding him now??


uhm, you'll find out soon .. cheers! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krani

This has been such an amazing read! I read all the threads in two days! Great work hon! You should have been the writer of the show! You have given every character their equal importance, and allowed them to grow and develop - all the while keeping the respect of Khushi alive and not allowing her to be hurt.


Great work! :)

~K

Thanks Krani! I'm so pleased that you read all this together!! (thats like over 50 scenes mind you 😲) a big hug for you for your lovely comment, but don't become silent or disappear ok? keep commenting!

cheers!

Originally posted by: sohara

Read the last two chapters together.

I was busy for the Eid celebration.
Awesome updates.
Nandini was flirting with Arnav without knowing he was Khushi's fiance! I know any girl would want Arnav as her partner. But Arnav belongs to Khushi only. So all the girls stay away from Arnav.
i'm glad that After some futile attempt Arnav got to get Khushi's company. It was so sweet how she slept on his shoulder. Arnav asked her directly that why she was avoiding him. Great going ASR.
I'm just waiting to see how the ice melt between them.


hey sohara! Eid mubarak dear! 😊 I'm so glad you liked the updates.. ya ya I too want to see how these two nuckle heads finally get talking.. stay tuned! 😉

Originally posted by: babli0204

Sorry...sorry...sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could not comment on the last two updates. I was out of station for a conference and did not have any time, though I have read them before going to bed late at light. Otherwise I just could not sleep (see what are you doing to us Smitzy?!?!?!)!

I am back now and must say the two last updates were sooo good!!!!!!!!!!! Nandini conflict is cleared. Arnav is going in the right direction! But our sanka devi is sooo unbelievable!!!!!!!!!! God only knows how her mind functions... But dot not worry, her sanak dev is there to take care of her sanak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS for the pms...


babli dear!! I was wondering where you had disappeared off to! See that is the jinx of having regular commentators.. they go gayab and the poor writer starts missing them 😉 you do the same to me too darling!!!

aww that was such a sweet comment "But dot not worry, her sanak dev is there to take care of her sanak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " that he is, really is (as long as she allows him to get close to her hehehee)
cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG fan

Hi Smitzy,

Please can you somehow start writing the script for the show as well...kya se kya kar diya hai!

Ab to is fic a hi sahara hai to imagine...kya ho sakta tha! Keep the good work.
RT


😊 😳

thanks so much dear!! oh I wish I could, I really do!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: merit

Hi Smitzy. :)

I discovered this FF just a couple of days back. So I just caught up with all the updates and have to say you are a splendid writer. To take up from a point in the show and write about just exactly what we've all been missing, it's amazing what you've done with this FF. That too updating on such a regular basis, without deviating from the characters, keeping it very realistic, and etching out a proper role for the side characters, which I think is one of the biggest flaws in IPK as a serial.

I realise that this is the fourth thread, and I've missed making an insane number of gushing posts which this wonderful FF deserves, and will just point out very few of the many many things I absolutely adored here. Otherwise this comment might just turn out into an SS by itself.😆

  • The past- One of the BIGGEST disappointments in the show ever. This was what the entire Raizada clan was based on, and they just killed it. You, on the other hand, kept all the pain, the angst, the sensitivity intact. Both the families were very well portrayed. & Arnav and Khushi's love yet their inability to be with each other. It was beautiful. Take a bow, lady.👏
  • The Rabba veys- I HAD to say this. The tingling, fluttery feeling in the stomach that the original RV gave us. It's gone on the telly, but hurrah, IT IS HERE. Very much alive. & here I was thinking I would never be free of ismailvegamze and nostalgia.
  • The relationships- Arnav-Anjali, Khushi-Garima/Shashi, the rest of the sibling bonds. Wow. This is what you do when you have an amazing cast. Give them this and NOBODY would have even dreamed of leaving. Wonderfully detailed, and Lucknow was an added bonus. It was where the past needed to be buried, since the city has always loomed large in the show itself, & you did it. Beautifully.
I have refrained from commenting on Arnav and Khushi, as you can see. Your vision of those two is beyond words. So real, so flawed, and yet so lovable. If I start, this will never end. So from now I will just comment as you go on.

I am adding you for pm. Would just like to end by thanking you for writing this. For showing us what could have been. So beautifully.


O . M . G!! 😲

That was one hell of a comment my dear!! WELCOME!! WELCOME to my alternate universe 😊 I'm really glad that you loved it so much, I just hope I'll keep you interested in the future as well!!
Obviously my reply to your wonderful words is just a "thank you" but please know, I'm smiling a 1000W smile and jumping around in glee!!

I see your sadness at not having had the chance to comment previously, well welcome to the commenting brigade from now on.. I want your comments and feedback ok? (I'm slightly greedy sorry hehehehe 😆)

you're on my pm list dear so wait for my next PM 😉

thank you once again!!

cheers!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13


Ms Writer ...aaj toh spoilers ki heavvvy baarish hui gawa hai !!!!😆


hehehehe ab kostin ke answers to dene padenge na 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Writer's note: Scroll down for the english version in green!
cheers!


Chapter 19 Scene 3

Aakash, Garima and Payal are happily talking to each other about the prospects of returning back to Shantivan but Khushi is silent during the whole journey between the airport and Laxmi Nagar, giving only monosyllabic answers when talked to. She is just staring out of the window, watching the landscape flash by her eyes in a hazy blur. But her mind is not registering that either. She is thinking about her experience in the flight.

She feels breathless for a moment as she remembers his gaze on her, his breath close to her face, his fingers brushing her torso... the playful words, the teasing talk, the murmurs of concern, and finally confronting her as to why she was running away from him... Khushi holds her head in her hands and shuts her eyes. So much had happened in the past week; the promise she had made to herself on the night of Aman's party, of not meeting or seeing or talking to Arnav, had pretty much flown out of the window from the day she had seen him sitting outside the hospital ICU.

His shocked eyes gazing at her as if she was an apparition... the relief filtering in through his hug... his admitting that he was worried about her... Buaji's and Payal's words confirming that Arnav had indeed rushed to Lucknow thinking she had the accident... him coming to their home and apologizing to Garima and Payal... him meeting her in the kitchen telling her that he had never stopped thinking about her... the concern in his voice when he had asked Aakash if she was ok post watching the CCTV coverage... him clearing Khushi and her family's tainted name once and for all in front of the media... him showing his engagement ring to the whole world declaring that he wasn't over her... him telling her that he never took off his ring...

Khushi rests her head on the glass of the window. There was no denying that Arnav had done a lot for her family in the past days. And now, finally things were getting back to normal; her jeeji was going back to her rightful place in the Raizada family; her Bauji was getting medical care for his post-op recuperation; her Amma was finally smiling. Khushi sighed.

*

Naniji, Anjali, NK and Mami are happily talking to each other about the prospects of returning back to Shantivan but Arnav is silent during the whole journey between the airport and Raizada Mansion, giving only monosyllabic answers when talked to. He is just staring out of the window, watching the landscape flash by him eyes in a hazy blur. But his mind is not registering that either. He is thinking about her experience in the flight.

He feels his heartbeats race for a moment as he remembers her doe-eyed look at the air hostess, first her stubbornness and then her acceptance on allowing him to handle her seat belt, her head on his shoulder as she dozed off peacefully... the painful exclamations, the cute questions, the dismissive retorts, and finally the counter questioning him as to when had she stopped talking to him... Arnav leans back on his seat and shuts his eyes. So much had happened in the past week; the promise he had made to himself on the night of Aman's party, of not meeting or seeing or talking to Khushi, had pretty much flown out of the window from the night he had figured out that Khushi knew the truth about Garima and his father much earlier than he did.

Her asking why would she be in the ICU... her reminding him that he wasn't part of her family anymore... her questioning him that when had he thought about what she may feel during every time he had mistreated her... her asking him if he could forgive himself... her lying cold in the middle of the night... her blurting out that she only returned the ring to him because she thought that he'd taken it off first... her jealousy at her friend showering him with attention... the need in her eyes as he prodded her to push him away...

Arnav gently squeezes the inner tips of his eyes. There was no denying that Khushi had gone through a lot in the past few days. And now, when he had hoped that finally things would get back to normal she was knowingly keeping herself at a careful distance from him. Arnav could figure that much of his own. But the question remained that if he had made his intentions perfectly clear to her, why was she still running away from him? Arnav sighed.

[Gupta House]

The first car halted outside the Gupta House and everyone slowly started getting out. The driver and Aakash help to get Shashi out and carefully seat him on his wheel chair. Garima, Payal and Khushi in the meantime start getting their bags out from the trunk at the back of the SUV.

"HAYE RE NANDKISHORE!! Agar tumre iss PHOOL lagane ke chakkar mein humra TV toota na, to Devi Maiyya ki kasam, tum sab ke haath tod denge!!" Buaji's angry yell echoed out till the courtyard making the new arrivals freeze on their spots. Khushi and Payal exchange wide eyed looks, before rushing towards the house.

Couple of men in green overalls sheepishly walk out of the main door at the same instant as the two sisters reach it. Buaji suddenly notices Payal and gasps audibly.

"Arre Payaliya! Tum log aai gaye? Humein to dhyaan hi naahi raha. Subah se yii ghar nahin chidiya ghar bana hui raha hai!" she exclaims irritatedly and pushes past the sisters to welcome Shashi and Garima. Khushi and Payal stare at Buaji's retreating back once and then at each other. Then they turn to walk inside the house and just as Khushi steps into the house a gasp louder than Buaji's escapes her.

[Arnav's car]

A phone call makes Arnav open his eyes. He looks down to see "Aman calling" blinking on the screen. Arnav receives the call.

"Ya Aman. I'm on my way. Abhi ghar ja raha hun," Arnav starts off.

"Sir, jaisa ki aapne aaj subah bataya tha, maine 100 rose ke bouquets Gupta House bhijwa diye hain. I believe florists ne poore ghar mein saja bhi diye honge," Aman replies.

"Hmm," Arnav replies. Somehow, from the moment of seeing Khushi in the Lucknow airport lounge to the time he saw her getting into the car with the other Gupta family members, he had already forgotten all about the flowers.

"Thanks Aman," he replies. "I'll be reaching office in an hour. So see you then." Arnav disconnects the call, suddenly trying to imagine Khushi's expression as she'd enter her house.

[Gupta House]

The entire living room is covered with blood red roses; some in vases, some in bunches, some in elaborate arrangements. No flat surface is spared; the top of the centre table is covered with a square arrangement, and the cushions decorated with huge wreaths; the walls are covered in garland like strings. Even the floor is covered in a million rose petals. The air is heavy with the beautiful fragrance of the fresh flowers. Khushi's hand flies to cover her the "O" that her mouth has formed. Her eyes widen as she scans the room from one side to another.

Completely oblivious to the rest of her family standing at the entrance and gaping at the garden that their living room now resembled, Khushi walks inside the living room dazedly. She lovingly caresses the almost life-size bouquet in front of her not realising that she is now smiling. She notices a piece of paper jutting out and she carefully takes it out. Khushi's eyes widen again as she reads the text on the paper. It has only three words written on it.

Welcome Home, Khushi

"Yii hi to hum keh rahe the Nand Kishore!" Buaji suddenly exclaims as she storms inside the living room. "Subah se yii phool daani wale log aaye rahe ghar ma, aur poore ghar ko bageecha banane mein lage rahe. Hum batiyaye rahe unka, bhaiya humre ghar ke aangan main ek bageecha pehle se bana hua raha, par Nandkishore, humri koi baat sune to na!" Aakash, Payal, Garima and Shashi wordlessly enter the house looking around at this exuberant decoration awestruck.

"Aree o Sankeswari, tum wahan putle ki tarah kaahe khadi ho?" Buaji asks Khushi's back.

Payal and Aakash exchange a glance before she firmly grabs Khushi's arm and walks her to her room. Aakash follows behind them carrying Khushi's bags. Khushi's room too is filled with vases of roses. She mutely sits down on her bed, looking overwhelmed. Aakash keeps the bags by her bed. Payal and he again exchange another wary glance, then he motions Payal to get Khushi a glass of water. She nods and walks out.

"Khushi ji?" Aakash ventures tentatively. Khushi looks up at him. "Are you okay?" he asks worriedly. Khushi nods her head in reply.

"Okay. Maine aapke saare bags yahan bed ke side par rakh diye hain," Aakash says pointing to the bag. "Aap araam se inko unpack kar lijiyega. Expecially, ye bag," he murmurs cautiously pointing to a big jute bag that looked like it was going to burst open at its seams. Khushi again nods mutely. Aakash stands awkwardly with his sister-in-law, at a loss what else to say. "Okay, to main chalta hun," he says lamely and starts walking out of the door.

"Jeejaji?" Khushi's voice makes him stop at the door and turn around. Khushi walks to him.

"Hum bahut khush hain ki jeeji ko aap jaise pati mile," Aakash looks at her, taken aback at this sudden track. Khushi bows her head down as she continues, "pichle 2-3 hafton mein jo kuch bhi hua hai, agar jeeji ko aapka saath nahin milta to na jane woh kya karti." Aakash too bows his head, feeling slightly embarrassed. "Aur Purani Haveli mein bhi, aapne humara dhyan rakha..." Aakash looks up and sees Khushi looking gratefully at him. "Humara matlab... dhanyawaad, har ek cheej ke liye..." Khushi whispers.

Aakash gently squeezes Khushi's shoulder. "Khushiji, aap meri saali kam, meri choti behen zyada ho. To meri choti behen ka dhyan rakhna meri responsibility thi." Khushi looks at him smiling at her. She too smiles back in response. "Aur haan, maine Payal ke liye jo kuch bhi kiya, agar aap hoti to Bhai bhi aapke liye wohi karte." Khushi stands rooted to her spot. Aakash nods at her once and walks out of Khushi's room. Her smile fades away a little.

Par unhone aisa kiya to nahin tha...

[AR Design office, a couple of hours later]

Arnav walks into his office. His secretary immediately follows him up to his office.

"Welcome back ASR," she murmurs reverentially. Arnav nods his head at her. "Sir, Creatives aur Production ke saath catch up meeting aaj 11:30 baje hai. Singapore clients ke saath aapki meeting hai post lunch. Aur sir aapke banker ne phir se message choda hai ki woh aapse urgently baat karna chahte hain." His secretary reads out from her notepad.

"Fix an appointment with the banker after the catch up meeting. Aman kahan hai?" Arnav asks her.

"Sir, Aman sir godown inspection ke liye gaye the. Abhi tak wapis nahin aaye hain," she replies back. Arnav dismisses her with a nod of his head. After checking his planner confirming the events of the day, he picks up his phone and calls up Aakash.

"Haan Bhai!" Aakash replies.

"Tum ghar pahunch gaye?" Arnav asks.

"Abhi to temporary ghar par hun, Bhai. Thodi der mein Movers and Packers aane wale hain. Uske baad Payal aur main Shantivan ke liye nikal jayenge." Aakash replies. Arnav smiles. It wasn't too long ago that Aakash had insisted on calling that house his home. And now it was getting labelled as a temporary house.

"Theek hai. So I guess we'll have dinner together then?" Arnav asks.

"Haan bhai," Aakash replies in the affirmative.

"Great. Uhm, by the way, Guptas theek thak pahunch gaye ghar?" Arnav enquires cautiously, not trying to give away any emotions in his voice. Aakash smiles on the other side in understanding.

"Haan Bhai, woh sab theek thak pahunch gaye. By the way, nice flowers," he adds good humoredly. Arnav rolls his eyes.

"Did she feel that way?" Arnav asks curiously. Aakash understood who "she" meant.

"Yes Bhai. She was speechless for some minutes," Aakash replies with a smile. "Aur haan, before you ask the next thing on your mind, I slipped in the box in her bag like you asked me to. She'll see it when she unpacks her things." Arnav sighed.

"Thanks Aakash," he replies gratefully.

"Why didn't you give it to her yourself, Bhai?" Aakash enquires. Arnav is rendered speechless for a moment. Because she is avoiding me? Because she doesn't want to talk to me? Because she's distancing herself from me? Take your pick.

"I just wanted to surprise her," is what Arnav says instead. "Chalo, I'll get back to work. I'll see you at home later then." Arnav disconnects the phone and boots up his laptop.

[Gupta House, afternoon]

Khushi is on the floor on all fours picking up the rose petals that were covering it and transferring it to a small wicker basket. She had vehemently refused Buaji from using the broom to sweep them away. After all they were Roses! She'd keep them in her room rather than displaying the living room as a "garden" as Buaji so frequently kept repeating the whole morning.

Garima was talking about Lucknow and filling in Bua about the operation and the post-op therapy that Shashi was due to have. The two ladies sat in the living room completely ignoring Khushi as she flitted between the living room and her own bedroom, emptying the former of the rose vases and bouquets and shifting them to the latter. At one point Khushi caught Buaji muttering something about "Sankeswar" and "Sanaka Devi" but she went on about her business as if she hadn't heard anything.

Right about lunch time did the living room start resembling its previous state much to Buaji's contentment. Khushi's room on the other hand resembles a RED box and the air is hanging heavy with the fragrance. Khushi sits down on her bed and looks around. Khushi was damn sure of who had sent those flowers as were here family members. But no one had uttered a word about it since they'd reached home. Finally sighing, she picks up her bags about to start unpacking them when Buaji calls from the kitchen.

"Parmeswari! Khana lag gaya hai. Mooh haath dhoi ke aao!" Khushi keeps the bag away and runs out of the room.

[AR Designs, Arnav's cabin, afternoon]

Arnav is sitting in his cabin when he gets a call on the intercom from his secretary.

"Sir, Mr. Bhushan, your banker, is here." She announces.

"Send him in," Arnav replies and keeps the phone down. A few minutes later the stockily built kind looking bald man walks into Arnav's cabin and sits down in front of him.

"Hello, Mr. Bhushan. I believe aap kaafi time se mujhse contact karne ki koshish kar rahe the. I apologize that I've been out of station," Arnav apologizes politely. "Please tell me." Mr. Bhushan takes out a file from his briefcase and hands it to Arnav.

"Mr. Raizada I've with me the documents of the Laxmi Nagar house that you asked for. The mortgage has been cleared as per your directions and the ownership has been transferred to Ms. Madhumati." Mr. Bhushan takes out another file from his briefcase and hands it over to Arnav.

"This isn't a problem though right? Seeing how initially I had transferred it to Khushi's name first?" Arnav asks as he goes through the papers.

"No Sir," Mr. Bhushan replies. "You need signatures of both the parties on the documents. But since, Ms. Khushi never signed those papers, the house was never formally transferred to her. So please ensure that this time you get Ms. Madhumati's signatures and it shold be good to go." Mr. Bhushan finishes explaining. Arnav nods.

"Thank you Mr. Bhushan," he murmurs.

"Mr. Raizada, there's one more thing. I am aware that aapne apni sister ke bank account par no expenses limit specify kiya hai?" Mr. Bhushan asks. Arnav nods as he takes the papers from his banker. "I want to bring it to your attention that pichle 10 days mein, there has been some strange activity happening on your sister's join account with her husband." Arnav looks up at his banker with a raised eyebrow.

"Are you sure?" Arnav asks.

"Yes sir. If you remember, right after your return from London a few months ago, you had asked us to keep you notified if there was any activity happening on Anjali Jha's joint account." Arnav becomes thoughtful. Yeah that was past his kidnapping and throwing Shyam out of the house. "Sir, aaj tak us account mein koi activity nahin ho rahi thi. But we noticed that money has again started being transferred from her personal account to her joint account in the last ten days." Arnav's eyes widen.

Mr. Bhushan opens a certain page in the file and taps it. "If you can see, this is the list of transfers being made by her joint account to another account based out of Delhi itself."

Arnav quickly glances down the list. He notices that there was a threeway transfer going on; first from Anjali's personal account to her joint account and then from there to another account. There were no other expenses taking place in the joint account, only a silent siphoning of money. But one entry catches Arnav's eyes. Three days ago, a transfer for exactly Rs. 50000 had been made to a branch in Lucknow directly from the joint account. His eyes narrow. Strange. He looks up at his banker.

"Thank you Mr. Bhushan. I need you to continue keeping an eye on this account," Arnav replies. Mr. Bhushan nods. The two men shake hands and then the banker takes his leave. Arnav goes on studying the file thoughtfully.





ENGLISH VERSION

Chapter 19 Scene 3


Aakash, Garima and Payal are happily talking to each other about the prospects of returning back to Shantivan but Khushi is silent during the whole journey between the airport and Laxmi Nagar, giving only monosyllabic answers when talked to. She is just staring out of the window, watching the landscape flash by her eyes in a hazy blur. But her mind is not registering that either. She is thinking about her experience in the flight.

She feels breathless for a moment as she remembers his gaze on her, his breath close to her face, his fingers brushing her torso... the playful words, the teasing talk, the murmurs of concern, and finally confronting her as to why she was running away from him... Khushi holds her head in her hands and shuts her eyes. So much had happened in the past week; the promise she had made to herself on the night of Aman's party, of not meeting or seeing or talking to Arnav, had pretty much flown out of the window from the day she had seen him sitting outside the hospital ICU.

His shocked eyes gazing at her as if she was an apparition... the relief filtering in through his hug... his admitting that he was worried about her... Buaji's and Payal's words confirming that Arnav had indeed rushed to Lucknow thinking she had the accident... him coming to their home and apologizing to Garima and Payal... him meeting her in the kitchen telling her that he had never stopped thinking about her... the concern in his voice when he had asked Aakash if she was ok post watching the CCTV coverage... him clearing Khushi and her family's tainted name once and for all in front of the media... him showing his engagement ring to the whole world declaring that he wasn't over her... him telling her that he never took off his ring...

Khushi rests her head on the glass of the window. There was no denying that Arnav had done a lot for her family in the past days. And now, finally things were getting back to normal; her jeeji was going back to her rightful place in the Raizada family; her Bauji was getting medical care for his post-op recuperation; her Amma was finally smiling. Khushi sighed.

*

Naniji, Anjali, NK and Mami are happily talking to each other about the prospects of returning back to Shantivan but Arnav is silent during the whole journey between the airport and Raizada Mansion, giving only monosyllabic answers when talked to. He is just staring out of the window, watching the landscape flash by him eyes in a hazy blur. But his mind is not registering that either. He is thinking about her experience in the flight.

He feels his heartbeats race for a moment as he remembers her doe-eyed look at the air hostess, first her stubbornness and then her acceptance for allowing him to handle her seat belt, her head on his shoulder as she dozed off peacefully... the painful exclamations, the cute questions, the dismissive retorts, and finally the counter questioning him as to when had she stopped talking to him... Arnav leans back on his seat and shuts his eyes. So much had happened in the past week; the promise he had made to himself on the night of Aman's party, of not meeting or seeing or talking to Khushi, had pretty much flown out of the window from the night he had figured out that Khushi knew the truth about Garima and his father much earlier than he did.

Her asking why would she be in the ICU... her reminding him that he wasn't part of her family anymore... her questioning him that when had he thought about what she may feel during every time he had mistreated her... her asking him if he could forgive himself... her lying cold in the middle of the night... her blurting out that she only returned the ring to him because she thought that he'd taken it off first... her jealousy at her friend showering him with attention... the need in her eyes as he prodded her to push him away...

Arnav gently squeezes the inner tips of his eyes. There was no denying that Khushi had gone through a lot in the past few days. And now, when he had hoped that finally things would get back to normal she was knowingly keeping herself at a careful distance from him. Arnav could figure that much of his own. But the question remained that if he had made his intentions perfectly clear to her, why was she still running away from him? Arnav sighed.

[Gupta House]

The first car halted outside the Gupta House and everyone slowly started getting out. The driver and Aakash help to get Shashi out and carefully seat him on his wheel chair. Garima, Payal and Khushi in the meantime start getting their bags out from the trunk at the back of the SUV.

"HAYE RE NANDKISHORE!! If while you go on decorating the house with your stupid flowers, you knock the TV down, then I swear to Devi Maiyya I'll break both your arms!!" Buaji's angry yell echoed out till the courtyard making the new arrivals freeze on their spots. Khushi and Payal exchange wide eyed looks, before rushing towards the house.

Couple of men in green overalls sheepishly walk out of the main door at the same instant as the two sisters reach it. Buaji suddenly notices Payal and gasps audibly.

"Oh Payaliya! You all are here! I never noticed. Since morning this house is resembling a zoo, I tell you" she exclaims irritatedly and pushes past the sisters to welcome Shashi and Garima. Khushi and Payal stare at Buaji's retreating back once and then at each other. Then they turn to walk inside the house and just as Khushi steps into the house a gasp louder than Buaji's escapes her.

[Arnav's car]

A phone call makes Arnav open his eyes. He looks down to see "Aman calling" blinking on the screen. Arnav receives the call.

"Ya Aman. I'm on my way. I'm going home right now," Arnav starts off.

"Sir, like you asked me to in the morning today, I've had 100 Rose bouquets delivered to Gupta House. I believe florists must have decked them up all over the house as well," Aman replies.

"Hmm," Arnav replies. Somehow, from the moment of seeing Khushi in the Lucknow airport lounge to the time he saw her getting into the car with the other Gupta family members, he had already forgotten all about the flowers.

"Thanks Aman," he replies. "I'll be reaching office in an hour. So see you then." Arnav disconnects the call, suddenly trying to imagine Khushi's expression as she'd enter her house.

[Gupta House]

The entire living room is covered with blood red roses; some in vases, some in bunches, some in elaborate arrangements. No flat surface is spared; the top of the centre table is covered with a square arrangement, and the cushions decorated with huge wreaths; the walls are covered in garland like strings. Even the floor is covered in a million rose petals. The air is heavy with the beautiful fragrance of the fresh flowers. Khushi's hand flies to cover her the "O" that her mouth has formed. Her eyes widen as she scans the room from one side to another.

Completely oblivious to the rest of her family standing at the entrance and gaping at the garden that their living room now resembled, Khushi walks inside the living room dazedly. She lovingly caresses the almost life-size bouquet in front of her not realising that she is now smiling. She notices a piece of paper jutting out and she carefully takes it out. Khushi's eyes widen again as she reads the text on the paper. It has only three words written on it.

Welcome Home, Khushi

"This is what I was saying, Nand Kishore!" Buaji suddenly exclaims as she storms inside the living room. "Since morning, this flower vase people have been walking in and out of the house making this place a garden. I told them that there is already a garden outside near the courtyard, but Nandkishore, who ever listens to me?" Aakash, Payal, Garima and Shashi wordlessly enter the house looking around at this exuberant decoration awestruck.

"O Sankeswari, why are you standing there like a statue?" Buaji asks Khushi's back.

Payal and Aakash exchange a glance before she firmly grabs Khushi's arm and walks her to her room. Aakash follows behind them carrying Khushi's bags. Khushi's room too is filled with vases of roses. She mutely sits down on her bed, looking overwhelmed. Aakash keeps the bags by her bed. Payal and he again exchange another wary glance, then he motions Payal to get Khushi a glass of water. She nods and walks out.

"Khushi ji?" Aakash ventures tentatively. Khushi looks up at him. "Are you okay?" he asks worriedly. Khushi nods her head in reply.

"Okay. I've kept all your bags next to your bed here," Aakash says pointing to the bag. "Unpack them at your ease. Especially, this bag," he murmurs cautiously pointing to a big jute bag that looked like it was going to burst open at its seams. Khushi again nods mutely. Aakash stands awkwardly with his sister-in-law, at a loss what else to say. "Okay, so I should probably leave then," he says lamely and starts walking out of the door.

"Jeejaji?" Khushi's voice makes him stop at the door and turn around. Khushi walks to him.

"I'm really happy that jeeji has a husband like you," Aakash looks at her, taken aback at this sudden track. Khushi bows her head down as she continues, "in the last 2-3 weeks, so much has happened. Had you not been there to support her, I don't know what she'd have done." Aakash too bows his head, feeling slightly embarrassed. "And in Purani Haveli too, you took care of me..." Aakash looks up and sees Khushi looking gratefully at him. "I mean... Thank you, for everything..." Khushi whispers.

Aakash gently squeezes Khushi's shoulder. "Khushiji, you're less of a sister-in-law and more of a kid sister to me. So taking care of my kid sister is my responsibility isn't it?" Khushi looks at him smiling at her. She too smiles back in response. "And yes, whatever I've done for Payal, had it been you, Bhai would've done the same for you." Khushi stands rooted to her spot. Aakash nods at her once and walks out of Khushi's room. Her smile fades away a little.

But he didn't do so...

[AR Design office, a couple of hours later]

Arnav walks into his office. His secretary immediately follows him up to his office.

"Welcome back ASR," she murmurs reverentially. Arnav nods his head at her. "Sir, your catch up meeting with the Creatives and Production teams is at 11:30 today. You have a meeting with the Singapore clients post lunch. And sir your banker has left word again that he needs to speak with you urgently." His secretary reads out from her notepad.

"Fix an appointment with the banker after the catch up meeting. Where's Aman?" Arnav asks her.

"Sir, Aman sir had gone for the Godown inspection. He hasn't returned yet," she replies back. Arnav dismisses her with a nod of his head. After checking his planner confirming the events of the day, he picks up his phone and calls up Aakash.

"Yes Bhai!" Aakash replies.

"Have you reached home?" Arnav asks.

"Right now I'm at the temporary house, Bhai. the Movers and Packers are expected shortly. After that Payal and I will leave for Shantivan." Aakash replies. Arnav smiles. It wasn't too long ago that Aakash had insisted on calling that house his home. And now it was getting labelled as a temporary house.

"alright. So I guess we'll have dinner together then?" Arnav asks.

"Yes bhai," Aakash replies in the affirmative.

"Great. Uhm, by the way, Guptas reached their home alright?" Arnav enquires cautiously, not trying to give away any emotions in his voice. Aakash smiles on the other side in understanding.

"Yes Bhai, they reached home alright. By the way, nice flowers," he adds good humoredly. Arnav rolls his eyes.

"Did she feel that way?" Arnav asks curiously. Aakash understood who "she" meant.

"Yes Bhai. She was speechless for some minutes," Aakash replies with a smile. "And yes, before you ask the next thing on your mind, I slipped in the box in her bag like you asked me to. She'll see it when she unpacks her things." Arnav sighed.

"Thanks Aakash," he replies gratefully.

"Why didn't you give it to her yourself, Bhai?" Aakash enquires. Arnav is rendered speechless for a moment. Because she is avoiding me? Because she doesn't want to talk to me? Because she's distancing herself from me? Take your pick.

"I just wanted to surprise her," is what Arnav says instead. "Okay, I'll get back to work. I'll see you at home later then." Arnav disconnects the phone and boots up his laptop.

[Gupta House, afternoon]

Khushi is on the floor on all fours picking up the rose petals that were covering it and transferring it to a small wicker basket. She had vehemently refused Buaji from using the broom to sweep them away. After all they were Roses! She'd keep them in her room rather than displaying the living room as a "garden" as Buaji so frequently kept repeating the whole morning.

Garima was talking about Lucknow and filling in Bua about the operation and the post-op therapy that Shashi was due to have. The two ladies sat in the living room completely ignoring Khushi as she flitted between the living room and her own bedroom, emptying the former of the rose vases and bouquets and shifting them to the latter. At one point Khushi caught Buaji muttering something about "Sankeswar" and "Sanaka Devi" but she went on about her business as if she hadn't heard anything.

Right about lunch time did the living room start resembling its previous state much to Buaji's contentment. Khushi's room on the other hand resembles a RED box and the air is hanging heavy with the fragrance. Khushi sits down on her bed and looks around. Khushi was damn sure of who had sent those flowers as were here family members. But no one had uttered a word about it since they'd reached home. Finally sighing, she picks up her bags about to start unpacking them when Buaji calls from the kitchen.

"Parmeswari! Lunch is served. Go freshen up and join us!" Khushi keeps her bag away and runs out of the room.

[AR Designs, Arnav's cabin, afternoon]

Arnav is sitting in his cabin when he gets a call on the intercom from his secretary.

"Sir, Mr. Bhushan, your banker, is here." She announces.

"Send him in," Arnav replies and keeps the phone down. A few minutes later the stockily built kind looking bald man walks into Arnav's cabin and sits down in front of him.

"Hello, Mr. Bhushan. I believe you have been trying to get in touch with me since a long time now. I apologize that I've been out of station," Arnav apologizes politely. "Please tell me." Mr. Bhushan takes out a file from his briefcase and hands it to Arnav.

"Mr. Raizada I've with me the documents of the Laxmi Nagar house that you asked for. The mortgage has been cleared as per your directions and the ownership has been transferred to Ms. Madhumati." Mr. Bhushan takes out another file from his briefcase and hands it over to Arnav.

"This isn't a problem though right? Seeing how initially I had transferred it to Khushi's name first?" Arnav asks as he goes through the papers.

"No Sir," Mr. Bhushan replies. "You need signatures of both the parties on the documents. But since, Ms. Khushi never signed those papers, the house was never formally transferred to her. So please ensure that this time you get Ms. Madhumati's signatures and it shold be good to go." Mr. Bhushan finishes explaining. Arnav nods.

"Thank you Mr. Bhushan," he murmurs.

"Mr. Raizada, there's one more thing. I am aware that you have specified no expenses limit on your sister's personal account?" Mr. Bhushan asks. Arnav nods as he takes the papers from his banker. "I want to bring it to your attention that in the last ten days, there has been some strange activity happening on your sister's join account with her husband." Arnav looks up at his banker with a raised eyebrow.

"Are you sure?" Arnav asks.

"Yes sir. If you remember, right after your return from London a few months ago, you had asked us to keep you notified if there was any activity happening on Anjali Jha's joint account." Arnav becomes thoughtful. Yeah that was past his kidnapping and throwing Shyam out of the house. "Sir, there was no activity taking place in that account till now. But we noticed that money has again started being transferred from her personal account to her joint account in the last ten days." Arnav's eyes widen.

Mr. Bhushan opens a certain page in the file and taps it. "If you can see, this is the list of transfers being made by her joint account to another account based out of Delhi itself."

Arnav quickly glances down the list. He notices that there was a threeway transfer going on; first from Anjali's personal account to her joint account and then from there to another account. There were no other expenses taking place in the joint account, only a silent siphoning of money. But one entry catches Arnav's eyes. Three days ago, a transfer for exactly Rs. 50000 had been made to a branch in Lucknow directly from the joint account. His eyes narrow. Strange. He looks up at his banker.

"Thank you Mr. Bhushan. I need you to continue keeping an eye on this account," Arnav replies. Mr. Bhushan nods. The two men shake hands and then the banker takes his leave. Arnav goes on studying the file thoughtfully.





Writer's note: Don't I like to jump right to business hahahahaa so people what do you think is going to happen now?? No no I haven't forgotten that Arshi are supposed to reunite.. it will happen 😉

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Edited by smitzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaand I res !!!!!
🤪dhinka chika dhinka chika 😆
****************** Edited ! *********************
Smita !!!!
Jump back to business haan? sach mein !👏
I loooved the way you described their turmoil, one after another, in exactly similiar situations ...made me help understand the two idiots slightly better ...I myself didn't have an answer to Arnav's question ...why is she avoiding him ? ...I actually had to go back and re-read your scene with Khushi and her monologues with Devi Maiyya earlier on ...
The rose-ka-overdose was a very cute ...Welcome home Khushi, indeed !😳 ...and loved that she wouldn't let anyone broom it, utha ke sab apne room mein le gayee ...awww !😳😃 My heart went out to her today ...awww !!!🤗
Sankadevi and Sankeshwar ..aur unki ajeeb si mahaSanak ...indeed !
I am quite restless after reading this, why do I feel that Khushi is not going to go running in his arms as he expects, if he expects that, that is !
We don't know yet what the gift entails, but how typical of Arnav Singh Raizada to not be able to figure out why she is avoiding him !!!!😲 Men, I tell you ...sorry if I sound sexist here ..I really don't care !
Everything is not 2+2=4 , right and not everything thing can be repaired by "fixing" it ...
Ek toh i don't know how can you be so bloody convincing about each and every character ya😲
...first, we wanted Arnav to redeem, and redeem big time ..hell and back ..I remember 😛...
...Then, awww Arnav ...bechara ...him crying on Anji's lap, Epic apology to Garima .. Amma ... apology to Khushi ...and Bang! I swapped parties, was completely on his side ... ab maan bhi jao Khushi types ... he accepts he screwed up big time, and he is willing to do anything and everything to win you back ...come on girl, don't play hard to get now !!! ...
...then, his confidence , his sexy smirk, his being too sure of himself, his not being able to understand that you can't go from A to E, without B-C-D, his not being able to understand that the effect he has on her physically is not everything...not something she can hold on to when she is unsure of the stability ... when she is insecure ..and insecure she is ! ... not enough ...
...and I don't even know how to react now...honestly ... bloody restless ...😕
Oh trust you to play with the emotions of your readers sweetie, you are sooo wicked, I tell you !!!😲😆
Loving it and the not-so-straightfroward LoveStory with your tadka ...was it ever meant to be simple haan ?😉
Brilliant !!!!👏
PS - I know I am steering clear of the Creep, but dont like the idea of Anji willingly funding him 😕, waise bhi meri sui kahan atakti hai you know that !😉😆
Edited by asr13 - 12 years ago

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