I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2 - Page 39

loved the update, but plz let arnav show some compassion to her. poor girl.

i will prefer 2nd one because this ff is a dark one so it should be dark and khushi's charecter will be justified then

lo mai aa gayi..
guess who?
☺️

Originally posted by: arhimadz

lo mai aa gayi..
guess who?
☺️

who is this blushing one??

Um he could be sweeter hopefully he changes his mind before he regrets it

but will khushi be pregnent after this???

Hey madhu...

Seems like i've annoyed a few of ur regular readers. But id like to point out that i m a regular too.

Anyhow...my intention was never to discourage u from ur first attempt of writting a dark ff. It was ur choice to wriite n like someone clearly pointed out a lot of yr readers like it. So by all means pls continue n i dont really really have to let a few minorities opinion affect ur writing n story.

I did write this b4 in my last comment n m saying the same... my comments are solely based on how i feel with each update. If u'd rather i dont post comment on this ff, u by all means have a right to let me know.

One other person also told me that when a person is repenting so much n asking for forginess humbly, they should be forgiven.
Again thats is a very personal thought n feeling. KHUSHI has always been forgiving...but would a normal girl, In todays day n age, who is well educated, ever be able to forgive this man? let alone one, 2 in this case?
1, A step father who literaly sold her to a man. 2 a man who bought her n tricked her again after she ran n trapped her to take advantage if the situation she is in???

Forget khushi or Arnav n think if it as a story u hear about in a television news. Will u expect the gurl to forgive the man n fall in love with him??? Or would u rather he be prosecuted???

I m not saying such things dont happen...strange things have happened n there r gurl who tend to forgive such heartless lusting brutes. but what i m saying is Its not in me to forgive any such advantage takers.

Madhu by all mean u can continue n like i said Always u write very well... i m just commenting to clearify my stand.This is by no means intended to offend any of yr readers or u too.

Happy writing

Avni 😊

Originally posted by: MUNIRANI

<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Dear Madhu I think it should be the 2^nd one because you yourself have portrayed the character of Khushi as such whereby she will prefer to die rather submit herself willingly for any cause and involve in prostitution or any antisocial activity. Apart unlike last season in this season you have shown khushi well- educated girl. I don't think any educated girl would be ready to sell herself for whatever reason. She would rather take a job and sustain herself and her family. </font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Madhu even I am a writer although I have not written for India forums but I can assure you one thing that as writer we have a social responsibility. We should not just to satisfy our fans write anything which might create a wrong impact on society.</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">If you take the first option then what kind of message are you delivering, that even a well-educated woman such as Khushi who is epitome of virtue and positivity is so weak that just to save her father business is ready to offer herself to any random businessman rather than fighting tooth and nail with to save her dignity.</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">The rest is your decision. </font></font>

Very well said... writter do have a huge responsibility as to what type of social massege they send...
N again the final plot does have to be ur choice so u can once again dazzle ur readers as opposed to write what they want to read.

Originally posted by: ramyarn

I prefer the first one. Anyways both 1st and 2nd plot will definitely shatter a normal women .


However I really wish ,that the 1 year contract is destroyed and she is free to leave AR after the Night. At least she will be able to avoid the humiliation and I cannot even imagine facing the same person to whom she had forcefully submitted herself because of circumstances.I love to see a strong Kushi after the Night who will not easily fall in the trap and charms of ASR.
I hope she will not go to her foster father after this. Whatever he did is not forgivable .Kushi by sacrificing herself she had fulfilled all her obligation towards her father. And he had lost the right in Kushi absolutely by making her sacrificial lamp.

I really liked few things in the last update .for instance Kushi not caring about Arnav when he had a cut on his finger. that is the normal reaction of a girl in that situation.

But Madhu u have complete right to plan the plot according to ur imagination.I trust u and I believe that whatever the update will be it will worth reading. I am actually looking forward to read the FF which is completely based on ur imagination without any amendments. The readers will comment,criticize but consider it as the impact of ur work .

Please don't hold this FF. I am actually waiting for Monday to read the next part.

Madhu as also one of your regular readers I would like to say I was quite surprised when you said you were going to write a dark ff. I just didn't realise it would be this dark. I have read a lot of your work I do love it all. I know that you have given the options above and I for one have had to really think about this one as it is you said that you didn't want to write an actual r**e scene but both options are almost exactly that.