I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: Madhu123

hey..

The readers who were upset about this are also close to me dear.. And even a single comment of theirs affect me.. I wont say that I felt bad.. But I felt something today.. This is the first time I have tried this dark ff.. I hope it goes well ahead..

Now I am not that sure of it.. Initially I still was.. But I promise my current feelings wont affect my writing style for sure.. This is what I felt.. And this is what I wrote.. To like or not is all on u guys..

People try different varities .. And i tried changing my plotss too from drama to bit dark ones..

Lets see how it goes ahead..

thanks madhu for the feedback, i have always found u experimenting with themes.. and this dark stories are an extension to ur work...and even after dark stories u might move to something else.

all i want is that u shud relax and go ahead what u feel like writing.. Or we are ready to read ur stuff on Blog.Dont get diverted by few opinions.

the bottomline is the India Forums Fan fictions page have a huge list of writers and FF's So ppl can choose according to their taste. Those ppl who hv problem with dark stories can avoid this story. TM's can choose from the crowd of FF's and writers according to their taste and preference and stop dictating the writer. Suggestions can always given to the writer but to comment on altering the concept is not acceptable because u have clearly mentioned that sensitive readers can avoid it. So many other FF's are there to suit evryones need so one shud choose FF themselves not Guide the writer.

meanwhile u can totally shift to blog...we are there with u always. meanwhile whatever u do will be the best we know.

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Ms. Fernandes

@PrincessD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

hey the first one seems a good one to proceed with...but u go as u have planned it madhu, am sure its gonna come together grt. Curiosity is killing me now. 😊

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Ayera

@chocolover98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Amaaazing parts!

I so regret not reading them earlier! Uurrggh!

So intense! Just loving it!

I'm glad that its darker than the season 1

Thanks for the PMs

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Ayera

@chocolover98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Oh and yes!

I prefer the first one!

It would be a r*pe and you can use this in the further parts as an advantage! ;D

Just keep with the storyline you've decided! I'm sure it'll be amaazing.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

go with 1st option 2nd is not tht nicee...

and plzz go with ur plot onlyy...

thnx 4 pm😃

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crizal

@crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

di 1st option is best.👍🏼

commented on pg 53

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MUNIRANI

@MUNIRANI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Dear Madhu I think it should be the 2^nd one because you yourself have portrayed the character of Khushi as such whereby she will prefer to die rather submit herself willingly for any cause and involve in prostitution or any antisocial activity. Apart unlike last season in this season you have shown khushi well- educated girl. I don't think any educated girl would be ready to sell herself for whatever reason. She would rather take a job and sustain herself and her family.

Madhu even I am a writer although I have not written for India forums but I can assure you one thing that as writer we have a social responsibility. We should not just to satisfy our fans write anything which might create a wrong impact on society.

If you take the first option then what kind of message are you delivering, that even a well-educated woman such as Khushi who is epitome of virtue and positivity is so weak that just to save her father business is ready to offer herself to any random businessman rather than fighting tooth and nail with to save her dignity.

The rest is your decision.