I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2 - Page 40

Originally posted by: KIARSHI

so di what have you decided? 😕 sooo you continuing with your original plot? or are you changing it?😒

Originally posted by: highonshows

Hey madhu...

Seems like i've annoyed a few of ur regular readers. But id like to point out that i m a regular too.

Anyhow...my intention was never to discourage u from ur first attempt of writting a dark ff. It was ur choice to wriite n like someone clearly pointed out a lot of yr readers like it. So by all means pls continue n i dont really really have to let a few minorities opinion affect ur writing n story.

I did write this b4 in my last comment n m saying the same... my comments are solely based on how i feel with each update. If u'd rather i dont post comment on this ff, u by all means have a right to let me know.

One other person also told me that when a person is repenting so much n asking for forginess humbly, they should be forgiven.
Again thats is a very personal thought n feeling. KHUSHI has always been forgiving...but would a normal girl, In todays day n age, who is well educated, ever be able to forgive this man? let alone one, 2 in this case?
1, A step father who literaly sold her to a man. 2 a man who bought her n tricked her again after she ran n trapped her to take advantage if the situation she is in???

Forget khushi or Arnav n think if it as a story u hear about in a television news. Will u expect the gurl to forgive the man n fall in love with him??? Or would u rather he be prosecuted???

I m not saying such things dont happen...strange things have happened n there r gurl who tend to forgive such heartless lusting brutes. but what i m saying is Its not in me to forgive any such advantage takers.

Madhu by all mean u can continue n like i said Always u write very well... i m just commenting to clearify my stand.This is by no means intended to offend any of yr readers or u too.

Happy writing

Avni 😊

Originally posted by: Madhu123

So many replies.. 95% almost asking me for my own plot with Option 1.. Many also stated its important for me as a Writer that what I show here in the fiction provides a correct social message to everyone.. Some said that its hard to forgive a guy who would actually be responsible for your misery. Forgiving such a guy would be actualy impossible and too cheap from the girls side.. And what not..!!!!

Warning already been given at the start.. Readers read it on their own will.. Some comfortable with the concept, some arent.. Some expect Khushi to be strong and continue Protesting.. Her values should allow her to give in.. Some expect Khushi to be a dead body in the whole act..

Some want Khushi to not work in AR after this act .. Some want her to be there and face him with all her strength and Strong will..

So.. I have read all the comments and based on that I took my decision.. If Option 1 or Option 2? If He would do IT or he WONT.. If she would Protest or she would give up... Lets wait for the part to come..

Some modifications made to my PLot.. And its based on the comments.. I dont regret making these ammendments.. I know some writers carry on with the plot irrespective of what the readers feel or want.. But I am unlike them.. No harsh feelings for them.. But for me mY readers POINT OF VIEW matters most..

So nothing much to comment for this FF from my side... Its just wait for tomorrow's update nd Precap.. IT will clear some thoughts and confusion..

Originally posted by: KIARSHI

thats why you are unique di

diii hats off 😭

PROUD TO BE YOUR SISTER🤗

Carry on i'll always be with you😛 but di i also admit i didn't like you writing a dark ff but when you carried on i liked this ff very much

i trust you😊

but one day he should change from a womanizer to a gentleman 😊

Originally posted by: Madhu123

I dont understand why DARK concepts are generally not Liked by some when its actually happening in the society these days.. I think maturity and way of accepting it in your life would make one comfortable with reading / thinking and understanding such stuffs..

Most of the readers of this Forums are Young crowd .. And that makes them more uneasy to understand and accept them dear..

But again.. It depends on every Reader.. SO the understanding differs..

And As per my image of writing FFs on Arshi in this forum has been thought in such a way who cant think of writing anything DARK .. Which I can say today is WRONG. A Writer has to be Versatile in his works which I am trying now...