I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2 - Page 37

Originally posted by: Madhu123

Just a Question - Select one..

1) Khushi giving up and submitting herself to him for saving her Fathers business.. (WHich means they do IT)
2) Arnav forcing her.. She protesting her best.. (THEY STIILL DO IT)

Now tell me which one sounds better.. For me.. the first one.. Is better than the 2nd.. Since I dont wish to show its an actual "R*pe"

Another thing.. Its a Dark FF .. And the concept itself urges me to write this Part.. As I said Season 1 she did everything .. She took the money, SIgn the contract .. yet not fulfilled her terms..

I dont want Season 2 to be the same.. Decide guys.. I have already drafted that Chapter.. But I can make editions to it.. If I feel Readers are intrested in a different Plot..

I like writing what Readers are comfortable with.. I dont mind changing my Plot according to their Wish.. Just lemme know

I understand where we have Dark Concepts like this.. Negative critics are more than Positive.. I appreciate both..

AND I can Hold the PLOT.. Untill the readers decide. So take some days anc lemme know guys.. I am all Ok.. As it is I have many more FFs to continue if I keep this ON HOLD

I think it should be the first one...but it should happen after some conversation..Khushi telling him she is not willing...but then finally submitting...

NOOO ... dont change the plot.go with your on imagination...if you change the plot then season 1&2 will be same...

promises are not meant to be broken...so it will be good if khushi submitted herself...

GO ahead madhu..👍🏼

i think first one is better option

honestly, i want something different, i like the 2nd one. Thanks u ... but go ahead with what u have :D

i would like to see the 2nd option actually...reasons...arnav never forces any girl,but khushi is a different case.he can't control his desires as it comes to khushi,2nd reason...khushi would decide to submit herself first,but finally she couldn't bear it to be touched by an unknown man like that and would start protesting which will make arnav angry again...and thirdly,arnav should repent more and more for his deeds once he is changed man and falls for khushi...and of course,everybody,including sreya's believe in khushi should prove true...she is not that kind of girl to submit herself to somebody's lust,if she was ok with it then,her running away from home is not justified.and since it is a dark story,there should not be any problem in it...So,my point of view...ofcourse i m sure i will luv however u make it...

I prefer the first one. Anyways both 1st and 2nd plot will definitely shatter a normal women .


However I really wish ,that the 1 year contract is destroyed and she is free to leave AR after the Night. At least she will be able to avoid the humiliation and I cannot even imagine facing the same person to whom she had forcefully submitted herself because of circumstances.I love to see a strong Kushi after the Night who will not easily fall in the trap and charms of ASR.
I hope she will not go to her foster father after this. Whatever he did is not forgivable .Kushi by sacrificing herself she had fulfilled all her obligation towards her father. And he had lost the right in Kushi absolutely by making her sacrificial lamp.

I really liked few things in the last update .for instance Kushi not caring about Arnav when he had a cut on his finger. that is the normal reaction of a girl in that situation.

But Madhu u have complete right to plan the plot according to ur imagination.I trust u and I believe that whatever the update will be it will worth reading. I am actually looking forward to read the FF which is completely based on ur imagination without any amendments. The readers will comment,criticize but consider it as the impact of ur work .

Please don't hold this FF. I am actually waiting for Monday to read the next part.

1st one is better.bz atleast kushi wont be raped.n more over the second one is common i feel.first one wud be different.but make kushi an iron woman aftr tht bz she will hv to face very cheap comments n attitudes from the society.akash's thots r still renounding in my ears.she shud be ready to face the ugly part of the world.

but plz dont hold it for long.bz already im dying of curiosity how kushi wud face all this aftr tht night.so holding it up is not at all an option.these 2 weekends days r enough for ppl to make decision.plz dont hold it more than sunday