An IPK FF: Love, Lies and Two Weddings? *Thread 1* - Page 105

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

I dont know even how to express my sincere gratitude to you! I really dont. What you have done is rescue something that I held beloved till February 13th, 2012. The most beloved show I have ever witnessed till God knows what took place after that. They had plenty of opportunity to resurrect it, I even held my breath till Holi thinking that maybe Arnav, the smart tycoon Arnav and sensible and strong willed Khushi, will save the show and there will be some serious character growth in the show. But, NO! They killed the show by completely robbing the true essence, the passionate love story of Arnav and Khushi by making a mockery of their past and "no significance Sheetal" track.

I started reading this story at 11pm and ended it at 2am. The whole night I went through such a mix of emotions that my Bechara pillow was begging me to stop soaking it with tears. Firstly, HOLY CRAP!!! IT WAS ALL PLANNED BY NANI AND SHYAM AND PAYAL (my guess).

I LOVE Shyam and I wanted him to be shown in a smart light, not "I cant fathom a plan to kill my crippled wife" avatar. Even if he is shown as a villian, at least show some ruthlessness to his character that doesnt resort to killing the baby. For the love of God, he is a sleazy lawyer. Use his sleazy brain to come up with plots that attacks Arnav's wealth from financial and company standpoint. Anyways, your Shyam is beautiful, funny and downright, scared of Arnav Singh Raizada.

Nani, is what a Nani should be. A strong headed woman who can read her kids and grandkids and makes plan to make sure they grow as a character. Her slow yet steady plan to get rid of everyone except the newlyweds from the house was BRILLIANT! I couldnt even fathom how you came up with a Nani that is smart and manipulative.

Anjali is by far, the most redeemed character of your story. Not the Di-lusional sister nor the my brother is more important to me than my husband. This Anjali is grounded in her role as a sister who will go to lenghts to help her Chottey and his love and makes sures she is NEVER a hindrance to his happiness. THATS THE ANJALI I fell in love with. Not the attention grabbing, I need constant reassurance my brother will not leave me avatar.

Payal, Aakash, Garima, Buaji, Mami and Mama all played out their role in your story in ways that is important to your story, not like side characters who provide comic relief.

Babuji, the wisest of them all played the role of a father like he is suppose to. Assuring and reassuring his daughter that she can always come back to him if her husband betrays her heart! HOW FREAKING BEAUTIFUL :)

And, you resurrected another character, Lavanya! OMG, I have been waiting so long for her to come to the show and play her best friend role out and help become Khushi comfortable with her Princess avatar.

Now, lets get to the main couple of your story. Sigh, Arnav. Mujhe Ishq wala love hua hain Arnav se. You actually made him use his TYCOONESS ( yup, not a word) to deliver the BEST MEHINDI and SANGEET KNOWN TO MANKIND. I was floating in cloud nine whenever he called Khushi in the night and uttered some delicious, sinful lines in his sultry voice. I swear I was smiling like a goofball, blushing and hoping with my hopeless heart that it was me he was saying those lines to. HAHAHA. He understood Khushi in ways that he never did before. He stepped back and thought things through before making an assumption about her (laywer-client hug). Despite having a harrowing past, he stepped down out of his high horse thinking he was responsible for her parents' death ( Were you driving the car?). To give her the wedding that she couldnt even dream about yet keeping it close to her "khushiness" is utterly romantic. And, his many escapades to her house to give her a private ceremony of every ritual. THUD!

Onto, Khushi! You took Khushi to a level that is yet to be seen in Indian serials. And, the fact of the matter is THE DIRECTORS CAN EASILY CREATE THIS CHARACTER. Well, if they want to censor the PASSIONATE Khushi, which is SO FREAKING INTEGRAL TO HER CHARACTER, they can still create a reasonable, strong-willed, child bride out of Khushi. But, they created a child who has to pull silly pranks on her Husband to get his attention. Her past is by far the best thing I have read so far. I love that despite what her lineage portrays, she still behaves like a small town girl who can in a flick of a thumb change her attire and poise to resemble her True Avatar, that is of a Princess. Yet she is grounded and she is doing it for HERSELF. NOT FOR ARNAV AND THE REST OF THE WORLD. BUT FOR HERSELF! HOW EASILY YOU SAVED THIS BEAUTIFUL CHARACTER!

To tell you the truth, I am this close in re-reading this entire story till you update Chapter 23. Bahahaha. Look what you have done!

Sigh, eagerly awaiting for you to update this story.