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SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

woww

beautifuullyyy expressed😳

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simi888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

what a beautiful update, so much depth and emotion, its almost all very overwhelming!

the love of a father who knows his daughter all to well. Im pleased to read that he wasnt disappointed in her, he only did it before her best, i think even kashi knows that deep down.

seems like a rocky road ahead for Arnav, getting kashi to acknowlege her feelings!

thank you for the update, as always it was magnificent!

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samba12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

A lovely update thank you. Thoroughly enjoyed the soliloquizing house. Poignant. Again shades of magical realism...

The story is getting intriguing...I did expect a move on the father's part - there would have been no other way to get Kashi out of that place and those circs. Oh there's me being presumptuous :)

So now it will be up to Arnav to rescue her, probably against her will, and get her away to a more positive future. The father is banking on this.

How much does the father know about Arnav and his sister? What of Pallavi? Looking forward to further updates and twists...

Just lovely to have you back!

Delighted to hear you're to be a mother. Take care.

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serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

And that was awesome.

Everybody's love shows through clearly to The one who has witnessed it all through the ages. It is almost like the viewer who doesn't have a voice is voicing his inner thoughts.

It is almost like any of the comments on this story. Telling how they feel but do not know what is going to happen or how the characters will finally act.

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charlie1950

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Haunting update

The haunting past haunts everyone who have

lived in KH and it have left its mark on the people

who still lives there,it's a father sincere effort to take

away the darkness out of his daughters life so she can

have some light to live in and with.

But whts gonna happen to pallavi.sigh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

This chapter seriously answered a whole lot of questions!

Kashi is passionate and deep with her love but she is also reluctant with it.

Her family history has made her wary and cautious, Arnav happens to challenge everything about her and I think that's the biggest hurdle she has to overcome.

It was definitely a risk on the father's part to ask Kashi to leave. She is unpredictable and this can go either way.

But Arnav loves her and he is insistent when it comes to things he wants so hopefully that'll help Kashi bend!

The spirit of the house gives off almost an affectionate aura for its inhabitants, including Arnav, and I think that is where the true magic lies!

A brilliantly written chapter!

Do continue soon.

Thanks, Pria.

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

That update... It weaved a web of tales, and I am stuck in it. That was brilliant!

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
This chapter seriously answered a whole lot of questions!

Kashi is passionate and deep with her love but she is also reluctant with it.
Her family history has made her wary and cautious, Arnav happens to challenge everything about her and I think that's the biggest hurdle she has to overcome.

It was definitely a risk on the father's part to ask Kashi to leave. She is unpredictable and this can go either way.
But Arnav loves her and he is insistent when it comes to things he wants so hopefully that'll help Kashi bend!

The spirit of the house gives off almost an affectionate aura for its inhabitants, including Arnav, and I think that is where the true magic lies!
A brilliantly written chapter!
Do continue soon.

Thanks, Pria.

Exactly - the House itself, or its spirit does seem affectionate doesn't it? With everything that has happened would one expect that? But then as it said it can only show the past and leave the inhabitants to make their own judgments; to not make their own mistakes.

Too many shortsighted people have committed too many mistakes in that place...it seems like the father has learnt what should be done through his experiences, through being a father, being selfless. But Kashi is hard-headed, I hope she can use the foresight she has been given, ie her dreams, to make the best choice for her own well being...to not sacrifice herself for bricks, mortar and legacies...not even the House wants that!

Edited by moomin4455 - 12 years ago

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sher_lock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

what an update. absolutely wonderful. u always surprise me. i loved the way u express the feelings and emotions of the characters. may be u don't know but your words have a lasting impact on your readers or i say me, making want to read more and more. YOU R EXTREMELY INNOVATIVE. i love your flawless language.