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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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A fathers thoughts ...

"How he wished the Gods would show some mercy and ease the burden of their fate…"

"Many consider me to be their curse too… and yet they were loyal to me… "

that is all that Govindan Namboothiri wants for his two beloved daughters ...

such an amazing chapter Devi ... had tears while reading ... 😭

a father releasing his daughter of all that ties her to him and this ancestral home ... away from the evil cluthes of Kalarikkal House ...

knowing that this is the only way she will ever find true happiness in life ... knowing that it wasn't just chance that brought Arnav here ... it was destiny ...

"The man loved her, he knew… It couldn't have been any other way… the man did not after all stumble onto my doorsteps merely by chance… "

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shamin1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

welcum back devi

and wat an update for comeback...namboothri is smart..i hope his daughter and soon to be son in law are smart as well...😉...wonderful updates but i m still missing lavender..hopefully u will resume it sometime in the future😃

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

just absolutely loved this chapter Devi... Amazing...

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

I knew it! Her father.. knows about her reservations.. and is giving her the chance to live her life on her own terms!

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zooni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

whoaaa what an update!!

just what was needed

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ducky_anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

OMG! Im so glad you put up this chapter! I was right! :D I could feel his pain, and sorrow. You wrote this beautifully!

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Phew!!!! This chapter i guess had all the answer's to our questions... Well, with this we know wat was a father's point of view while kicking his own daugther from the house... Offcourse , there was'nt any other way.. He thought atleast his daughter could be saved from the curse's...

Again, an awsome update.. This chapter was really important... N you wrote it really well!!!

Continue soon!!!!!!

Love,

Deep😛

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Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Devi,

I read through all the comments, readers are divided as to whose thoughts were portrayed?! Was it KH's, Mr. Namboodiri's or both intermingled!! Am confused even on 5th read..because all options seems right!! What the hell..Is confusion ka kya naam doon?..please Devi iss confusion ko door karo...

PS: But the little birdie in my head says it is KH's soul which spoke!!

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thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

wowww we missed u keep goin

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Just an observation about sacrifice. When you sacrifice you lose a little bit of yourself in that whether it is selfless or not. Knowing Kashi would sacrifice for her loyalties this was the wise move of a knowing father. Sometimes the harshest steps are neccessary to remove one from the roots that we cling to and to alter the path that we assume is predestined.

Have I told you lately... that I love your writing and the brain that comes up with these stories that make me feel better about myself.

Hope you are starting to feel better. Santa is on the way with the pregnancy glow and pampering gifts... yeah, he told me.😆

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