SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14) - Page 8

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Bro!! 😃
I really liked the title of this OS and its true! love doesn't have any counts!! 😎
and my lord! the length of the OS was quite long ha..but it was completely worth it!! 👏
there are soo many things which i want to point out mahnn..acha..let me strt..
firstly swayam smiling lyk a majnuu in the morningg!! Awww..amazinggg!! then ReYam talks..lol..funny and exactly lyk bestiess!!
Then kriya fuming with anger..poor rey...and swayam saying to kriya--tumhe toh handlr krna nhi aata..lol..oversmart niklaa majnu toh!!
then Sharon and swayam rehearsing..you have explained it very beautifully bro..how they feel each other by a touch and their eyes flew sparks!! and then sharon's breakup!
Uske baad toh sab kuch mind blowing tha!! swayam speaking hs heart out to sharon...and sharon fully impressed and touched by his innocence!! then sharon calling up swayam and ordering him lyk a diva and then the confession was very nicely put!

It was a very pleasant read!! 😳

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

LOVED YOUR TITLE!great job!! Thanks so much
the starting ka ReYam ka convo!!awesome so entertaining!! 👏 ahahaahha couldnt stop laughing!! the way you described each character woooww amazing job there!! Yaya i tried my level best to make it hilarious and i am happy to see that you smiled so yaaay i did it...😊
awww when u told to imagine taanu i had the same smile which was glued on my face!! 😆the whole Reyam convo was bang on!!every dialogue was= to ReYam ka dialogue !! i wish i could copy all the dialogues!!😆
when you described sharon's character n her past... i was like 😲 shiii yaar she has a boyfriend.. then when i came to know about aarav (my jaw dropped)!!😭 Are that was just the way story was dear... sharon had to fall in love with swayam inspite of all the things went on in her life... and ya you can copy all the ReYam dialogues maine koi patent registry nahi karvai 😆😆😆😆

They start dancing now and first time Sharon touches swayam and something like a current ran in swayam's body as well as Sharon too felt something special. Sharon was feeling something that she used to feel long before when she was with Aarav
awww 😳 😆😆 you are one of kind satu you never fail to make me laugh with this spontanious reactions of yours

She never felt like this with Raj or in fact Aarav.
awww yes!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 are are ye koi competition nahi chal rahi yar jo tu jitne ki jashan mana rahi hai😆😆😆

Something he spoke that even Aarav never spoke about. Aarav did know what I wanted but he never knew how my heartfelt. This guy here has just read my heart perfectly just as no one has ever read it.
awww 😳 yes!again as swayam is way better than aarav!! 😆 Are but swayam and Aarav are different... yes swayam was better than Aarav but he knew sharon through Aarav dear... so chill Aarav was also sharon's love...don't compare them yar...Aarav is different from Swayam and his love for sharon was also different

But as swayam was man of his words and this truth that he knew Aarav will now go with him in his grave.

swayam you rock!! 👏n the way you showed sharon's realization wooww super awesome!! thanks you thank you and ya swayam rocks abhi true love hai to vo to dikhna hi hai na

There has been no single night where I not dreamt of myself proposing you.
⭐️
But you have something very deep that even Aarav didn't have.
wooohooo yeeaa!!! he is better than aarav...
😆😆😆 are firse comparision ki but i ya Swayam was better than Aarav because he was doing all the things that Aarav failed to do..
when he went on his knees he brought happy tears in my eyes n then they hugged *sigh* hayeee
ok now i know am acting like a typical fan-girl!!😆 YOu are a rockstar really kahan se kaha pahoch jati hai dreamland mein...😆😆😆
i enjoyed this OS to the BITS!!your OS was a PERFECT MIXTURE of ENTERTAINMENT N ROMANCE!you please mark my words!!
i would really NEVER forget this OS in my life!!i could imagine TanHa in front of my eyes!😳 love TanHa! I am so gald to read this and i really dont have any answer for this lines of your thanks I love you for this i can only say that satu😊😊
bhaiyyyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗love you for this OS... I too love you satu 🤗 !!this OS brought total excitement ..shocks..happiness!!n it increased my excitement 4 mon!eppp 😳 hahahaha my exitement has too have increased for swaron hug now...
oh!god!my eyes are filled with tears now n dont wry happy tears!!:')
oppss bahut zyadi tarif ho gayi mujhse.. but haan yeh tarif bhi well deserving hai!!i know you are tired reading this comment!!last thing to say you've earned more RESPECT from me!n yes love you bhaiyya!!🤗KEEP WRITING! Awh i am speechless now i too love you satu my sweet lil sis yar 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: beeny

d only thing i can say dat i'm speechless after read dis u r mind blowing writer man
start se rey & swym's convo just too good & thoda sa lovely fight 😃 kriya & rey & deir plan just too good
one thing jo reh gaya wo tannu ka smile😳 i just loved dat
sharon diva & kafi sare twist & arav & all d things were beautifully expressed
& last ka swaron convo was just out of d world
it's really nice pourity of love was everywhere

i just loved d OS
Thanx for PM😃

Originally posted by: JoshuaD

Nice OS ..keep writing :)

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

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the satu comment will pakka come by tonight so sry for the delay bhaiya... 😔 Satu comment was fun to read as usual
unres
i know i've commented ahead.. and i have already replied to that comment😆😆😆
but here i would just say that..
i love SwaRon n TanHa from the bottom of my heart me too love SwaRon / TanHa from the bottom of my heart where last tip of my blood is pumped up 😆😆😆😆 but seriously love TanHa as much as love SwaRon
reading this side of SwaRon a whole new... story makes me love them more... ohhh this makes me so happy to know i am able to make you love SwaRon/ TanHa more
i wish i could seen this seen being done by Tannu n sneha!! 😳 hahaha i to wish this was done by tanha
they really mean a lot to me... I am so happy to know this and your comment means alot to me
reading this shade of SwaRon makes me feel SwaRon-ish!! 😳 awh i like this comment more keep going swaronish satu