SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14) - Page 10

Originally posted by: dips098

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">A-W-E-S-O-M-E OS ...it was such a pleasant read throughout ...where to start ...hmm...will start from ur title ...Love doesnt have any counts...loved the title of the OS... life is all about giving a second chance ...same rule applied for LOVE ...loved the wa u gave a 2nd chance in Sharon's life...

The way u described our Majnu boy's room...it was awesome...i could imagine that scene with all those details in ur description ...Sharon's dancing pics as his sceen saver ...he is sooo sweet 😊...Loved the way u described his waking up with a cute smile 😊..it was dreamy

Loved REYAM convo ...it was bang on... i could visualize the scene while reading it ...</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">Swayam you lazy bones and son
of a moron wake up it's 7:30 already and if we don't reach at the
academy by 9 that bitch volcano is going to kill us 🤣</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font>
<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">Are swayam you crazy little
prat of monster wake up agar hum log late ho gaye to vo volcano meri
bechari baatcutter ko cut karke khane lag jayegi. Yar samaj kitni
mushkil se baatcutter pati hai yar.</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">🤣</font></font><font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">bechara Rey </font></font>


<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Special mention to the Mungeri lal dialogue...AWESOME ..even the SIREN & Baat cutter one..too good...<font size="4">🤣</font><font size="4">🤣

</font>The way you introduced our DIVA...in true sharon style...her dressing ...her talking style ...her complexities...everything ...she was THE DIVA...


The way you gave sharon - raj- arav -swayam angle ...it was mind blowing... from the swaron meet ...the mood of the OS changed ...from funny to emotional ...romantic ...painful yet effective...

Their first touch ...first dance...i loved her confusion..her feelings ...her insecurities...about love...about life...</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">While dancing Sharon for once
saw directly in swayam's eyes. She directly felt something touched her
heart. She never felt like this with Raj or in fact Aarav...</font></font>
<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">Sharon was confused that
why this guy is leaving so much impact on her mind and soul in the first
meeting. Surely swayam had qualities that Aarav possessed and he was
more than what Aarav was capable of that's what Sharon was constantly
thinking there.</font></font>

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The feelings were deep , painful , complex yet so pure ...she wanted to be close to him...she didn't like the feeling of going away from him...</font></font>

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<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Swayam was the true majnu boy here...he was in love with sharon without meeting her...just wid her pictures ...n arav's stories abt her...i liked arav's angle here ...he was the connection between sharon...his life n death both connected them...</font></font>

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">SWAYAM'S confession...he read her mind..her past...present and opened his heart in from of her...</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">I have loved you through your pictures miss diva. Your eyes in the picture speaks for you and I talk to them everyday.</font></font>

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">SWAYAM'S confession...he read her mind..her past...present and opened his heart in front of her...</font></font>

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Her realization...it was painful...emotional...touching...
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<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">I think yes I am in love
with this guy. I don't know how. But I can feel the same thing that I
used to feel for Aarav. This is it now I understand Aarav why you always
said that love is love it has no counts. Ya you were right love is love
and it has no counts I am in love with this guy swayam because he makes
me feel alive his touch resemble you Aarav.
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<font color="#660099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">she ordered him to meet her in 15 mins...true sharon style...her confession ...it was heart wrenching...i could feel her pain... and her happiness of finding love again...</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font size="4">You know everybody say that
your first love is something that you always cherish. And your real
love is only love which you do in first place.❤️</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">❤️</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">❤️</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="4">❤️</font></font>

<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved this piece of work...it was touching...heart wrenching ...an emotional ride throughout ...fun,romance,friendship,love,pain ... in short U ROCK 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...thanx for this amazing OS dear...keep them coming ...i just love ur writing style .😊</font></font>
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<font color="#660066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved this piece of work...it was touching...heart wrenching ...an emotional ride throughout ...fun,romance,friendship,love,pain ... in short U ROCK 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...thanx for this amazing OS dear...keep them coming ...i just love ur writing style .😊</font></font>
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Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--

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*unres*
Bhai🤗
Amazing os👏
Loved it😊
Sharon ,the arrogant diva and swayam the cute lover boy
Love it how swayam could break away all the barriers sharon holds and overcome her inhibitions and insecurities😃
Sharon's pain,the pain of losing your first love ,was very well described👍🏼
swayam started loving sharon only by seeing her pics n hearing about her..😊
reyam's bond was shown very well
loved the confession part😃
Beautifully written!!👍🏼
keep cuming with more of such amazing stuff bhai😊
Thanks for the pm!
Best of luck for ur xams😃
p.s: really sorry for unresing my comment so late😔
I completely forgot about it..thanx for reminding😊

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

first of all so sorry for such a late reply now coming to the OS.

i really loved the title...goes so well with the story =)

the OS was very nice had a good time reading it...loved the reyam bond they always attract me and when used tobrilliantlyin a great OS it just makes it all the more fun to read.

i loved that swayam was in love with her after just seeing her picture and how he penetrated the shell she created around herself. just like our very own swayam did in the show.

in short i really enjoyed reading the OS. =)

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

edited my comment

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67194459

P>S: all the best for ur exams =)...inshallah my rocking brother will get rocking scores =D

Originally posted by: Anindita91

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">n yes all the best for ur exams...i am seriously a big bhulakkar...😆</font>

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