A-W-E-S-O-M-E OS ...it was such a pleasant read throughout ...where to start ...hmm...will start from ur title ...Love doesnt have any counts...loved the title of the OS... life is all about giving a second chance ...same rule applied for LOVE ...loved the wa u gave a 2nd chance in Sharon's life...
The way u described our Majnu boy's room...it was awesome...i could imagine that scene with all those details in ur description ...Sharon's dancing pics as his sceen saver ...he is sooo sweet 😊...Loved the way u described his waking up with a cute smile 😊..it was dreamy
Loved REYAM convo ...it was bang on... i could visualize the scene while reading it ...Swayam you lazy bones and son of a moron wake up it's 7:30 already and if we don't reach at the academy by 9 that bitch volcano is going to kill us 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Are swayam you crazy little prat of monster wake up agar hum log late ho gaye to vo volcano meri bechari baatcutter ko cut karke khane lag jayegi. Yar samaj kitni mushkil se baatcutter pati hai yar.🤣🤣🤣bechara Rey Special mention to the Mungeri lal dialogue...AWESOME ..even the SIREN & Baat cutter one..too good...🤣🤣
The way you introduced our DIVA...in true sharon style...her dressing ...her talking style ...her complexities...everything ...she was THE DIVA...
The way you gave sharon - raj- arav -swayam angle ...it was mind blowing... from the swaron meet ...the mood of the OS changed ...from funny to emotional ...romantic ...painful yet effective...
Their first touch ...first dance...i loved her confusion..her feelings ...her insecurities...about love...about life...While dancing Sharon for once saw directly in swayam's eyes. She directly felt something touched her heart. She never felt like this with Raj or in fact Aarav...Sharon was confused that why this guy is leaving so much impact on her mind and soul in the first meeting. Surely swayam had qualities that Aarav possessed and he was more than what Aarav was capable of that's what Sharon was constantly thinking there. The feelings were deep , painful , complex yet so pure ...she wanted to be close to him...she didn't like the feeling of going away from him...
Swayam was the true majnu boy here...he was in love with sharon without meeting her...just wid her pictures ...n arav's stories abt her...i liked arav's angle here ...he was the connection between sharon...his life n death both connected them...
SWAYAM'S confession...he read her mind..her past...present and opened his heart in from of her...
I have loved you through your pictures miss diva. Your eyes in the picture speaks for you and I talk to them everyday.
SWAYAM'S confession...he read her mind..her past...present and opened his heart in front of her...
Her realization...it was painful...emotional...touching...
I think yes I am in love with this guy. I don't know how. But I can feel the same thing that I used to feel for Aarav. This is it now I understand Aarav why you always said that love is love it has no counts. Ya you were right love is love and it has no counts I am in love with this guy swayam because he makes me feel alive his touch resemble you Aarav.
she ordered him to meet her in 15 mins...true sharon style...her confession ...it was heart wrenching...i could feel her pain... and her happiness of finding love again...
You know everybody say that your first love is something that you always cherish. And your real love is only love which you do in first place.❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved this piece of work...it was touching...heart wrenching ...an emotional ride throughout ...fun,romance,friendship,love,pain ... in short U ROCK 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...thanx for this amazing OS dear...keep them coming ...i just love ur writing style .😊
Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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