SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14)

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Pratik bhai tussi great ho 👍🏼 exams saar pe naach rahi phir be ye OS likk dala😳,

hayeee what an OS, it was like watching tv with swayam and sharon enacting the whole thing wonderfully, jee haa aap ne kamal kar diya hai ji. Pratik it is really touching yaar,Swayam loving her for six long years OMG our majnu is the best😛 awww poor sharon, after losing her first love, but for a moment i thought she started loving swayam on rebound but later the whole thing had a twist, she loves swayam more and not the same way as aarav. Superb update, def a worthy gift for sneha. It is just awesome👍🏼

Sukanya Bahen tussi bi great ho akhir behan to meri hi ho na...😆😆 ha yar kya karu meri first love sneha D3 se ja rahi hai to uske liye exam kya yamraj bhi nach raha hota to use bhi hold pe rakh deta thode time ke liye...and i am so really happy suks tuje puri story achi lagi ya vo ek twist tha because story se ye hi batana tha love is love and it can happen any number of time sometime your second love is more deeper than your first love...i guess tere case mein vo banda robin pattinson hai kyun ki first love to shantanu hai na 😆😆... anyways thank you for a wonderful comment dear...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL
res

Baz you Devil little Monster adhe me latka ke bhag gayi vapis aaiyo jaldi waiting for this Res to get EDITED

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shravani97
Awesome OS bro...
Great work as usual...
Nice concept...
And interesting tooo...
This OS really touched my heart...
Aww...Swayam is always dreaming about Sharon...
Wow...Sharon was impressed by Swayam in the first interaction only...
Like the way you wrote the confessions...
Beautifully written bro...
Loved it...

AWHHH Shravani meri behan nice to see you first of all...thank you so much for reading the update and leaving a wonderful comment dear... i am gald to know that you liked everything about this os...thanks so much for liking this and i am glad that i was able to give you a pleasent reading...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

"SwaRon OS: Love doesn't have any counts" umm..a new SwaRon OS! yippee! so is it a OS based on the current situation or a OS which has it base borrowed from some historic SwaRon scene or is it something else? would it be a Humorous OS/ a depressing OS/a romantic OS? what could probably be the concept? these are some of the questions which i had in my mind when i read the title of your OS. i was intrigued to find out the content. as i read the whole OS i had these answers with me:

It was a Humorous OS,an OS in which one could find the ticklish ReYam bond and also, the mention of the Siren/Volcano Sharon Rai Prakash; it was a Depressing one too as it went through the changes which took place in Sharon's interior cause of the worldly miseries; and for the last it was a romantic OS as Sharon could feel something unique in Swayam's first touch. so now when i have these answers with me,i would say this OS was a one-of-its-kind OS with the power-packed SwaRon intensity and chemistry, ReYam chuddi-buddy bond, glint of Kriyaansh romance, and for the last but absolutely not the least Sharon Rai Prakash: the diva junction in it.

First of all Annu my sweet lil cutie pie thank you for reading the OS...and what a comment yar anu ye itne words me tune jo kaha hai na you have no idea what they mean to me... i am so touched to read this anu... tune isme vo sab kuch likha hai jo muje bol raha hai ya actually which is making me proud ke maine ye os likha...trust me this is the best comment of my life ye bada nahi hai but iski effect bahot badi hai annu... i am glad to read each and every word of that comment and i am flattered anu really flatterd i am short of words really... thanks from the bottom of my hear...thank you so much for liking everything and commenting it with equally pleasure and it was just awesome feeling to read this comment... Thank you anu for giving me such a mind blowing comment...love you my sis you are really rocking...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ABBY92
OMG, This was a really sweet OS and absolutely a fitting Goodbye gift for Sneha and for the TanHa lovers !! I loved the whole concept and truly, love can happen more than once !! I loved how Sharon didn't wait a second longer the moment she realised she's in love with Swayam to say it to him !! I just found the whole story BEAUTIFUL !!

Thanks Abi for reading this os and leaving a wonderful comment... yaay it makes me happy to read that you think its a fitting goodbye gift for Sneha and TanHa lovers... i am really glad that all my work is appreciated like this...thank you so much for liking the concept and story...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sweety-reylover
bhai , y always swaron?????????????? 👎🏼😒

a kr update too...plzz 😊

nywayz update👏👏

ty for d pm...

Sweets Thank you for reading the os my dear sis... and i am glad you liked it... and y always SwaRon because i have readers in SwaRon and I am a SwaRon fan to start with because i started to watch D3 just because of SwaRon...Though later i fell in love with Kriyansh too and now i love Kriyansh as much as i do SwaRon... but the only thing is i have no reader to read my any work on Kriyansh and moreover i dont know my write ups on kriyansh will be read or not so...

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lalita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

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tanuka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Seriously Monster thank you so very much so nice words and praise for this os... Ahh i love it when you make comment like this short but effective... keep reading my work and keep boring yourself with it😆😆😆... and ya i hope os zyada choti nahi thi...😆😆😆

Monster , tereko mera comment short lagga , next time se lamba de dungi 😛

yeh os ekdum hi chota nahi tha and i loved the story 😃

and I DIDN'T GET BORED

Edited by tanukaswaron - 12 years ago

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

Monster , tereko mera comment short lagga , next time se lamba de dungi 😛

yeh os ekdum hi chota nahi tha and i loved the story 😃

and I DIDN'T GET BORED

ok monster next time aur lamba comment degi yaay i am excited now... and chal glad to know that monster tuje update chota nahi laga and story bhi achi lagi...tune dekha monster mai pehli bar apni story banake aaya koi promo pe se story nahi banayi 😆😆😆😆

Acha tu bore nahi hui...ye shocking tha yar hahahahahha

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sajan_swaron

-res-
will comment in some time
gotta study :p

this os was amazing

will give a proper comment after sometime

exams r nearing

sorry😒

n thanx for the pm😃

-unres-

hey so firstly i would like to say ur os is amazing

firslty that inrto of swayam took me to another world

it was sooo nice

then rey tring to wake up swyam but swyam lost in sharons dreams

awww

he love her from the past 6 years but never told her

kria waiting for reyam n hoped that sharon wouldnt reach before them in order to save them

such a sweet character of kriya

finally kriyansh sent swayam to work with sharon😳

sharon pissed off with her so called bf was so sad

finally swaron together

swayam knows sharon from top to bottom so i was not surprised reading that he aaranged eveything what sharon wanted pefectly

awww sharon felt something being close to swayam

she was reminded of aarav

her past was so sad

specially because it changed her to his rude girl

i was sooo happy when sharon n her so called boy friend broke up

swayam was there to support her n not to sympathise with her

it was sooo good

swayam confessed his feelings was the most awaited moment of the os

it was nice to read how aarav considered swayam as his bro n shared evrything abt his relationship with sharon

n how swayam fell for sharon

finally sharon realised she loves swayam

she calls him home n they confess

n swayam as u said is a man of his words did not reveal that he knew aarav

sharon was so happy that swayam knew the real sharon

n indeeed a perfect ending to this os

well i dont really believe in love its always been friendship for me but u potrayed the feeling well😊

Thank you so much for unres the comment so early yar...inspite of your exams you made out time thats really so sweet of you re...and i am glad to read that comment really i can say you have understood each and every line in the perfect snese i wanted it to convey...you comment just glued me up on the screen i was reading the whole comment and suddenly it came to end i felt like kyu end hua ye...jitna acha maine likha nahi tha usse zyada achi ye comment thi...i am glad that u had pleasent reading and you mentioned every part of the story that you liked while reading... i am so happy that there were so many things that you liked and still remembered...and lastly ya i am also not firm believer in love in my real life but with swaron there is only love love and more love...so ya i had to enact this feeling in swaron only... i always have fealt that agar pyar hai ya hota hai to vo ek bar hi hoga aisa kuch nahi hota...so this was outcome of my thoughts fighting with each other...thanks so much for a wonderful comment...you know that i am a fan of you so anything you say about my work will gule me up...

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