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Nivi what do i say girl you have some magic in you thats for sure...
anyways its actually first time i have read a story which is led by viha...or say story revolving sololy around viha...but i must say i enjoyed reading it...
ViHa are an interesting couple and you have tried very best to come up with something that touched...
Actually ViHa story itself is very simple yet very entertaining because they are cute with the way they have pulled off those characters because it needed a simplicty in the person playing the character...
you have managed to portrey the samw simplicity in ViHa story here also...and that makes this story attractive in spite of the fact that it doesnt have any ideal ending or lt is a long story..
but this story has its share of plus as it brings out some of up close personal thinking of both vicky and neha...though neha's side description was more impactfull compare to vicky as neha was more expressive here...
But that doesnt mean vicky's character lacked anything it was just that story was itself like that neha would be seen more...but the angony or passion of vicky for neha was still there and could be felt...
on the whole a brave but a beautiful effort...nicely done nivi...and ending was actually different but effective as it said the importance of communication in a relationship...a slight mis communication can dent you very badly...so nicely conceptualised the whole story nivi...a loud applause for you...tap your back for attempting something that very few have attempted...
thanks for pm...liked the os very much...do write more and more...
pratik...
anyways its actually first time i have read a story which is led by viha...or say story revolving sololy around viha...but i must say i enjoyed reading it...
ViHa are an interesting couple and you have tried very best to come up with something that touched...
Actually ViHa story itself is very simple yet very entertaining because they are cute with the way they have pulled off those characters because it needed a simplicty in the person playing the character...
you have managed to portrey the samw simplicity in ViHa story here also...and that makes this story attractive in spite of the fact that it doesnt have any ideal ending or lt is a long story..
but this story has its share of plus as it brings out some of up close personal thinking of both vicky and neha...though neha's side description was more impactfull compare to vicky as neha was more expressive here...
But that doesnt mean vicky's character lacked anything it was just that story was itself like that neha would be seen more...but the angony or passion of vicky for neha was still there and could be felt...
on the whole a brave but a beautiful effort...nicely done nivi...and ending was actually different but effective as it said the importance of communication in a relationship...a slight mis communication can dent you very badly...so nicely conceptualised the whole story nivi...a loud applause for you...tap your back for attempting something that very few have attempted...
thanks for pm...liked the os very much...do write more and more...
pratik...
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