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Originally posted by: Neeti96

Hey there! Amazing OS ! Really heart-breaking coz ViHa was like the cutest and funniest couple in the show!! It was long but I didnt realise it coz it was really interesting!! I hope ViHa patch up soon in the show as well!

Your English is superb and I loved your imagination! Please write more and more!

I loved the last line which you wrote down separately :)

Do make one on RiMar soon! Pretty please! And thanks for the PM

Btw u wrote "He had Neha a coke" I think it should be handed. Oh yeah.. Thanks a lot Neeti for telling me! 😃

Originally posted by: tanzz15

Hi dear!! Very well written.loved the concept.But i just can't stop myself from saying that,i would have loved it more if you had made neha speak in her own style:) i mean 'weak english'...:) though i think,its really tough for a girl like you having fab english skills...:):P :D

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.

awsome os...
Lykd it
thankx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: pooja123456

good post...
thanks for the pm.
do pm me wen u post!!

Originally posted by: rhu90

all 3 os are awesome...

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Wowww. . . . .
1ce again awsome os. .

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Nivi what do i say girl you have some magic in you thats for sure...

anyways its actually first time i have read a story which is led by viha...or say story revolving sololy around viha...but i must say i enjoyed reading it...

ViHa are an interesting couple and you have tried very best to come up with something that touched...

Actually ViHa story itself is very simple yet very entertaining because they are cute with the way they have pulled off those characters because it needed a simplicty in the person playing the character...

you have managed to portrey the samw simplicity in ViHa story here also...and that makes this story attractive in spite of the fact that it doesnt have any ideal ending or lt is a long story..

but this story has its share of plus as it brings out some of up close personal thinking of both vicky and neha...though neha's side description was more impactfull compare to vicky as neha was more expressive here...

But that doesnt mean vicky's character lacked anything it was just that story was itself like that neha would be seen more...but the angony or passion of vicky for neha was still there and could be felt...

on the whole a brave but a beautiful effort...nicely done nivi...and ending was actually different but effective as it said the importance of communication in a relationship...a slight mis communication can dent you very badly...so nicely conceptualised the whole story nivi...a loud applause for you...tap your back for attempting something that very few have attempted...

thanks for pm...liked the os very much...do write more and more...

pratik...

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

awesome os...

loved it...

my first ever os i hv read on viha so thnx for making it superb...

thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Nivi i am glad my comment brought smile on your face...and got your point from next time i will post two lines comment so that you dont get to wait for my long comments ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...