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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

I hope you all enjoyed reading my One Shot! 😳

And if you did not like it, I am extremely sorry!

Particularly the length - 4 pages, 1,285 words!

I applaud myself for it! 😆 After-all first try! 😉

The next One Shot will take time as I haven't thought of anything yet.

Next might be RiMar / NiMmi / BhaSha not very sure! 😕

Most of the times I will write, I will try to do it on whichever character/ couple the majority wants. 😉

Also, I am going to give all the couples a chance and I hope I will succeed in it! 😆

Keep visiting My Imagination Hinterland! 😉

I wish I can receive all the love and support I have received so far in all my other works and you continue to read.

Also, if you have any ideas or suggestions and also demands, feel free to PM me and I will try to write on them

Like-Comment-Share. An easy three step procedure to be followed for more and more Updates! 😳

Do NOT COPY/PASTE and claim as your own.

Plagiarizing is stealing and would be reported to the India-Forums teams and you may have to face severe after-effects and consequences.

Read and enjoy and don't put yourself into these ugly stuff.

Lastly, I would like to hear long comments and reviews from you after every One Shot has been posted since I like LONG Comments.

People who are generous enough, please do the honors.

With Love,

Nivi ❤️

Now your to comment, good and bad both comments are welcomed... 😃

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Wow.. Amazing OS..
I dun get.. How u write wid such ease..
This was ur first attenpt on Viha n u surpassed it..
N d message behind d whole update touched my heart!! I loved how swayam came to help Neha... Dis is Swayam.. A selfless human !
U portrayed viha's feelings really well..
Both loves each othr but fails to confront..
This OS must hav a continuation.. Wtsay????

Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Beautiful os on viha...
Nicely expressed their feelings in words...
I always feel that feelings cnt be expressed in words but u prove me wrong...
I personally loved it... Very nicely written
thnx for pm

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Hey there! Amazing OS ! Really heart-breaking coz ViHa was like the cutest and funniest couple in the show!! It was long but I didnt realise it coz it was really interesting!! I hope ViHa patch up soon in the show as well!

Your English is superb and I loved your imagination! Please write more and more!

I loved the last line which you wrote down separately :)

Do make one on RiMar soon! Pretty please! And thanks for the PM

Btw u wrote "He had Neha a coke" I think it should be handed.

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Hi dear!! Very well written.loved the concept.But i just can't stop myself from saying that,i would have loved it more if you had made neha speak in her own style:) i mean 'weak english'...:) though i think,its really tough for a girl like you having fab english skills...:):P :D