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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome OS!!Loved every part of it!! 😊

The part where Swayam takes Sharon into a room full of sketches is so sweet and extremely well written!!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

too good deepu di! i wish i could write like this. the emotions were penned down beautifully no stones were left un-turned. you made every possible effort to make it one of the most beautiful OS i've ever read. i loved Sammy's concern for Shona especially in case of those bullies! he is so much of her boyfriend at the very age..and i loved the fact that you bound the real SwaRon together as they passed through a same phase! loved the ending where they went to the room where swayam had his store of shona's pictures!

all in all it was great OS.

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hey it was amazing

sammy n shona made me say awww every second

u did a fantastic job

the way sharon reveiled to swayam that sammy was her first love

n swayam reveiling to sharon that he always knew she was his shona

awww

it was very cute n amazing

keep writing more

thanx for the pm 😃

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Deeps I have got goosebumps yaar, OMG ye kya tha? Deeps IT IS SUPERBBB AND A MINDBLOWING ONE. Oh love is so pure and divine and Sharon and swayam are childhood sweethearts.❤️ Deeps you are multitalented and just out of the world. 👏 Wah when i started reading I felt ye kya hai, sharon and swayam at the age of 7 and still swayam wants only her happiness, Deeps it is really a different and rare concept, Till the last moment i didnt think that swayam knew that sharon was his shona, you make us readers so engrossed in the update even if there is an earthquake we wont know⭐️. That is the pull of your updates. Deeps hats of to yaar for giving us such a beautiful OS, love you so much

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

THE PARFECT TMLS STORY

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏PERFECT dIPS❤️

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That was a really sweet OS !! I loved 8 year old Swayam, the way he was so protective over his Shona but too bad, destiny separated them at that time but Destiny was kind enough to let them find each other again, Making each other their first and last love !!

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Sammy ki Shona... Shona ka Sammy...

gosh!! i just loved it...hamara swayam toh chalak hai bhai...apni shona ko pata liya aur use pata hi nahi chala 😆

I love every Os of swaron and when u are the writer...

SUPER DUPER AWESOME!!🤗

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow WOW WOW...i mean classy yaar deepu...initially i thought it was ordinary os...but after reading that full os, i cant stop saying my self k that was nice...n u wrote that both childhood n young age phase very well.👏

i love the part when sharon beating swayam on his chest...n swayams fake pain.n thanks for the pm...love u yaar.