ArHiCollabSS:The Mistake#2,#3 link- Completed

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#941

this is an awesome SS.
Every part is a suprise. Cant wait for the next part whoever gonna write it.

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#942

eh.? now who is this payal.? lol m enjoying this.!

payal package n that too ek k sath ek muft offer.!

loving it.! do continue soon..

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#943

Where did Payal come from? and her pregnancy?

we don't even know who she is...nice twist!

I really liked the morning scene...they both are so naughty!

Khushi was worried about the clothes..LOL

she thought they tore everything...hahaha

do update soon!

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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#944

Loved the update.

Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.😊

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#945

love this collab ss.. hilarius and witty

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#946

Man that was unexpected!

Payal?Who is she? His Ex or something? Gaawd And she is pregnant?

It was so dreamy until the last line happened!

I hope its not Arnav's baby! I don't want khushi to suffer 😭

Anyway It was an awesome update Kalyaani. Dreamy one!

Just loved it!

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#947

dt was nyc..:)Arshi has accptd der rltnshp n nw spendin soo much tym together..:Dwil ol d lies n ol..:):Dwndr wt Payal has cum up wid..:Dloved it..:)thnx..:)

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#948

First of all thanks a lot Rasgulla for recommending New FF every time you PM so kind of you.

One round of big applause to the excellent friendship you all writers have.

Kushi with her antics really look cute. Arnav so like gentleman. Wonder what will happen when their secret encounters come to light. Sure there will be kaboom in the premises.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#949

OMG K, that was pretty hot and passionate update.
And Payal seriously? I need to revise. Was she even there before? What a twist, K!

Saiyyu and lazy, finally you guys were successful getting K on board!