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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

Fab update K!!!! But who is this payal????

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Omg! What in the world is happening?! Is Payal really pregnant? :O
K, the update was very perfectly written. Loved it.

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Awesome update kalyani...
Wer did payal come from?????Pregnant???
Oh god...hope it doesn't end in MU...think is it akash's baby...wil wait for the next update to kno who's..
God...these two are too hot to handle...loved it...
Khushi worrying abt clothes and arnav in romantic mood...wow...
Thanks for the pm 😉

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

Haila... Paya is pregnant!!! That was devious Kalyaani 🤣. Loved the update... it was very well written and very much marked with Kalyani's style.

All the best to whoever is writing the next part - with that not so little twist at the end... the next one will be cracker 😆.

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pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Were did payal come in ... She is pregnant with whose child ...

Is dere any MU b/w Arhi ... Loved the update ...

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

Thread three coming up, I see!!

I am reading it now!! 😃

All you girls have been bringing this story in an awesome way!

The last twist was epic!! 😛

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 12 years ago

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anam munir

@anamunir

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

i'm here again readin' the two recent updates!!!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#928

The whole update was wonderful but what a bomb in the end!! Who is Payal here?? And she is pregnant, really?? But with whom child, definitely not Arnav's... Pleassseee... Romance has just begun & don't want trouble finding them so soon...

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anam munir

@anamunir

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#929

hey farah!!!
just a little complaint first: u got to write the very first consummatin' update n u never bothered to write the MC!!!
i'm nt much into that stuff buh usually when that point comes writers love to execute the lovemakin' by writin' the mature stuff :(
loved the ground rules!!!
loved the way they have prioritized their relationship over their careers [not practical though] buh hah i loved it dammit!!!
anamunir

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#930

nice one k...
pyal part was shock...hope this involve akash...
i hate clif hanger...hopefull next update will be soon
thanks fr pm...samiya and Rasgullq_sp