My Fan-Fic: When Hate Turns Into...(#2) - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwww 😳 great ff and great part 😳
continue soon
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very nice pary but could u plese continue a little more often or make ur parts longer please 😳
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ANGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!! 😡 lol, wat is wrong with him, oh my oh my, his behavior better be good! 😆

lol, grr8 part! 😃
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awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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i jus popped by 2 c ur commentz n i wanted 2 inform u that i've thought of a very romantic part for angad and kripa. there will b other ones but this one is going to b the most sweetest. 😳it will b posted in the nxt 3/4 parts...

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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can't wait anymore plz continue soon
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no more waiting.. please continue.. its really exciting and i want to no a lil more bout angad's plan.... and wats wit prithvi and simone.. will anyone ever figure it out? and by anyone i mean the parents...hehe.. continue sooonn!!
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hey guyz. a realli realli sorry, but i'm going to post the next part tomorrow morning(saturday)!i'm realli busy 2day. n i still have to sort out some bits in the part.. i'm sorry. hope you guyz can wait 1 day.. plzzzz 😭
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=[ ok...i'll wait, cant wait to read it! 😃
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Episode 40:





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Kripa sat back in her seat as Angad talked to the person on his mobile. As he carried on talking, Kripa played with her bangles and wondered who Angad was talking to. All of a sudden, Angad put his eyes towards Kripa. Kripa didn't have a clue to what was going through Angad's mind, when all of a sudden Angad mentioned Kripa's name.
Angad: "Yeah Kripa's here."
Angad went back to his same position and sat back in his seat.
Angad (whispering): "No are you stupid or something. Of course she doesn't know."
Kripa's eyes shot up. She overheard this. What was Angad up to?
Angad: "O.k. I'll chat to you later. Bye."
After talking to the guy on the phone, Angad started the car, off to the hotel.
On the way to the hotel, Kripa felt awkward sitting in the same car as Angad, even though he was her husband now. Kripa thought to herself that she should confront Angad and the phone call.
Kripa: "Angad…"
Angad (still driving), slightly turned his eyes to look at Kripa.
Angad: "Yeah?"
Kripa: "Angad, who was that o the phone with you."
After a minutes silence, Angad sighed. He stopped the car again.
Angad: "Kripa…it was no one- just an old friend."
Kripa: "Oh…o.k. sorry I asked but you seemed so…"
Angad: "So…what?"
Kripa: "So…mischievous when you said my name."
Angad: "Look Kripa, if I said it's no one- then you should understand that it's no one."
Saying this, Angad started the car again and drove off.
Kripa: "Angad, why are you getting angry? All I asked was who was on the phone? You don't need to get annoyed over that little question."
Angad: "Yeah exactly. You asked me that and I answered your question. Then why are you keep on asking more and more questions."
Kripa: "Forget it Angad. You are getting pissed off with me for no reason. I don't want to talk about this topic. Just carry on driving."
Angad felt the sadness in Kripa's voice. He felt quite guilty for being so harsh on her.
He thought he should say something to her but then thought that he should leave Kripa how she is. She will get over it.
Soon Angad and Kripa had arrived at the hotel.
Angad got out of the car, and then walked around it towards Kripa's door. He opened the car door for her and helped her out with his hand. The wedding dress was too heavy for Kripa. As Kripa got off the car seat and onto the pavement, Angad closed and locked the car door and the car it self.
Angad: "Chale?"
Kripa looked up at Angad. That was the first word he had said to her after the argument in the car. Without answering his question, Kripa walked off to the entrance of the hotel.
Angad opened the entrance door of the hotel. The both stepped in. they were amazed at how beautifully the hotel was. Angad walked Kripa to the check-in desk, which was right in front of the door as they came in.
Angad: "Hello, me and my wife booked a room in this hotel. Here are the tickets."
The man at the check-in desk: "O.k. sir. I'll just check what room you've booked."
Angad: "O.k."
As the man at the desk checked what room Angad and Kripa would be staying in tonight, Angad turned to look at Kripa. She had her arms folded. One of her arms was around her waist and the other arm was straightened upwards, with her fingers playing with her expensive necklace that Naina had gifted her before the wedding.
Suddenly, the man at the check-in desk called Angad. He gave Angad the keys to the room and with his hands, directed Angad to where he should go to find his destination (his hotel room).


As Angad searched for his and Kripa's hotel room, he had put Kripa's hand into his. Kripa allowed Angad to do this- she didn't was to make a mountain out to a mole hill.
As they walked to their room, Angad looked down at Kripa. She was still quite upset. Suddenly Angad thought to himself that he should consult Kripa.
Angad: "Who died?"
Kripa looked up at Angad with the oddest look on her face.
Kripa: "What?"
Angad: "Why are you so quiet? Has someone died?"
Kripa understood what Angad was trying to say. She couldn't help but giggle. For a minute, she had forgotten all about what had happened in the car.
Soon Angad and Kripa had found their room.
Angad opened the door wide in front of Kripa.


Inside the hotel room:
As Angad and Kripa walked in, Angad quickly headed for the bathroom. He was at the door way of the bath when he looked back at Kripa.
Angad: "Kripa I'm jus going to take a shower. I'll be out in about half an hour."
Kripa gestured to Angad saying that it was o.k.


As Angad took a shower, Kripa sat on the mirror desk and took off her 'dupatta'. She combed her hair out. Suddenly, Angad's mobile rang.


Hope you like it
Veronica

PS
Angad misses Kripa as she goes back to her family in the Sharma house for two days.


Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago

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