ArsHi FF - The First Rain-Imp NOTE on Page 22

Wow. Now that is a promising start... and so emotional... gah I can;t write after this!! what the hell Pankti!

I don't read many OS's, but this one was a bliss to read. It was very interesting and very emotional also. Your description of the smallest details, tie in so beautifully with their feelings.

btw i adore this song also. So i am definitely in if you wish to continue with this :)

A beautiful start! :) I'm looking forward to a continuation! :)

Panktilicious! This OS has FOUR of my favorites: rain, yellow umbrella (yes, I walk around with a bright yellow umbrella!!!), gol gappas, and the song!

Beautifully sketched piece--and that you included a song from my one my favourite films -Jab We Met- made the piece especially poignant. I want to urge you to continue--but even if you do not, it stands perfect as you left it. I always look to your work to paint details and you never disappoint. That image of her at the counter, drenched hair, the umbrella, the fragrance of rain on earth, shaping the perfect boat...(did I also catch a glimpse of Boondi?)...

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Hello Panktiji! Tussi great ho ji!

...And that's about where my punjabi ends! :')

Okay, so what exactly do I start with? You know that I love your descriptions, it builds a picture, takes you to that place, and you're lost, and you find each piece as you read the story. It's always been that way, but this time I felt it more than ever. The picture was beautiful!

And the story, the part about the sadness of the Father and daughter, the yearning of two lovers who had parted ways, all so beautiful Pankti! I am in love with them!

And I WILL make it my life's mission to bug you for the next update, so you better, and I mean BETTER start typing it! Like Now!

Shoo! Go! Why are you still reading? :')

PS: And the dedication, Mr. P is a lucky fellow! ;) Actually you are both lucky! Eeep! I wanna squeal you guys are so cute! :')

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

Oh I love you so so much!

The pictures are just perfect, I mean PERFECT!

Especially the little girl one, such a cute one!

And I still dont know if I want to continue it, so dont know about Updating soon..LOL!

Thanks a lot, you know how much this means to me, dont you?

Mwah!

And the yellow umbrella with teal (green?) top! It is fate I tell you! And fate is telling you to continue this story!

I love the girl too! So cute! :') I love a papa Arnav or even a Mama! I am just...yeah...I drool over him a little more than I do any other Arnav! :')

Mwah back!

u are gonna continue...arent u??please do dat!!!