ArsHi FF - The First Rain-Imp NOTE on Page 22 - Page 4

Originally posted by: mistyrains

I will be really blunt with you her, I cried by the end, (when the school flashback begins) of it. School shall always hold a special place in my heart, always make me nostalgic, because like me and many others, we have all been through the adorable saga of stolen glances, blushing smiles and sexy smirks. This OS was so, so relate-able, but still like a breath of fresh, cool, monsoon air. Get it? No, I shall elaborate. The whole joy, at least that's what I felt, when Khushi sees that first love all the way back from 12th grade, is just overwhelming. Then the familiarity of his voice, that nanosecond when their eyes collided, I'm sure, she and he, both of them might have gasped, a tiny flutter, shudder might have gone through their hearts. See, therein lies the power of your writing, you are able to make your readers emote. Its simple, subtle, yet leaves us with a vivid imagery, and I'm telling you I shall be thinking about the two of them, standing under the rain, thinking back of school, throughout the week. I demand, that you continue, hence. Then, about Khushi and her parents, millions of girls would've been in her place, listening to parents, getting into a decent University, we are technically bred with that thought. A little crush, or for that matter love, shall always be termed a distraction. And I think when they parted ways back in school, there would always be that dull ache at the back of their mind remembering the other. I wonder if they thought of each other, or if everything reminded them of the other! I apologize if I am looking too much into everything or probably sounding like a hopeless romantic, which I am :p But your writing, this piece is so beautiful, that my fingers don't feel like stopping. The song, the rain and the kid add to the ethereal feel of this piece. I am still in a daze right now. I think I shall go give it the third read.

And the dedication Pankti, you husband is one lucky man.

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

Thank you K for your kind words. You have very intelligently manipulated me into having just one option - which is to think about the continuation. And that I will, I promise.

I am glad you enjoyed the song, and the OS so much.

P.S I love how you keep calling it the start of a story, you are pretty insistent, arent you? Ha!