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craziefan

@craziefan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

loved it.. very beautifully written...

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Totally loved it 😊 .. You r such an amazin writer...

I knw u said dat it would be two shot but will b thnkful if u do continue it 😊

cya

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

thanks for the PM

awesome

He goes everyday to the grocery just to see her and waits every night until she

gets on her bus.

Now obsession or love?

can't wait for the next part

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nishika_24

@nishika_24

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Nice one mausam... I am returning after a long time and vow!what a treat... Looking for more,...

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Very interesting start. U should continue... it sounds promising and i will love to know what transpires next between them, how they approach each other.

Can u plz PM me whenever u update?

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Razz22

@Razz22

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

wow this is really well written! hope you put up the next part soon

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Heeba

@Heeba

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Cant wait for the second part... Its is soo different but LOVED IT :)

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Shruti

@...shruti...

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

That's a great start waiting to read more

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

nice update... so khushi has turned him into a stalker...

continue soon

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Wow!!! Such an amazing post, very very thrilling I got goose bumps reading it. Her simplicity & beauty turned a businessman's life upside down & made him a stalker.

Pls continue fast as I will be stalking this thread till I get the next update