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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Oh. Em. Gee.

That was so... so.. enticing!

I was literally bewitched by the play of emotions that you brilliantly portrayed thru words!

I loved it and I can't wait to read the next part!

Continue soon (:

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@Jhalak29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Loved it masam, will look fwd to it😃

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@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

You have to continue this! I'm addicted to finding out whats going to happen soon, you have me on the edge of my seat, waiting to find out. The details were simple but so cunningly written and the idea itself was very unique. I loved it!!!!

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

woww..its really awsome..idea is fab.waiting to read more.
He became her customer,her stalker..
He the mighty ASR did all that for a girl behind the counter..

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Masam..
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I'm like totally speechless.. mindblowing 2 Shot woman ! :D
gaaah .. love with this..
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loving the stalker - business- ASR
and the timid, cute- cashier- Khush
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since he has been buying Cigars .. is he a legit smoker !? I mean.. holy macarooni.. cauz that's a lot. but aha, he just wants to see her.. so he does so.
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intriguing story, Loving to bits !
when are you updating ?! do it FAST ..tehe, spanks.

Edited by hilly - 12 years ago

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

This writing is absolutely brilliant! Please do continue with the second part! I am waiting eagerly for it! By the way LOVE SNOW PATROL. :)

Edited by Dalmuthuya - 12 years ago

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow! I really mean it...Wow! I was pulled in from start to finish. Amazing OS. Can't wait for part 2.

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sias2

@sias2

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Masam whenever i get your pm for any updates i just jump with joy to read them..
you are brilliant writer and stories which you write are so beautiful that i never want you to stop writing them..
please update soon i seriously wanna know what happens next

Edited by sias2 - 12 years ago

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

that was cute..
so now khushi knows her stalker..wat next??
awaiting for the next part..

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Masam i won't tell you what i liked or found intriguing about your story. I'll end up writing my longest essay on this forum ever.

All I'm telling you is stop doing everything in your life, type the 2nd part and post it. Don't eat, don't sleep, hell! don't pee. Write this NOW! Please :)