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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Oh my!!!
Beautifully written, Masam...i just loved it.
It gave me a kind of Twilight feel...you know, silent yet speaking volumes.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
ur narrative style always amaze me. Loved this OS 😊 as always its very captivating by your descriptive details. Awaiting for the next chapter 😳

(note: wondering y the business tycoon using the economical car, corolla??? )
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kookie2020


No kidding.
I stalk your work and your blog big time.


Mommy, I have a stalker! 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

It is tomorrow :D (for me at least :P )


The sun is out already ?! 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: masam


The sun is out already ?! 😲




It is 1 p.m in India :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: kiddy-kavya

Oh my!!!

Beautifully written, Masam...i just loved it.
It gave me a kind of Twilight feel...you know, silent yet speaking volumes.😛


You really think Twilight is capable of giving out any ideas 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Oh wow!
I love the mysterious narrative form! Its amazing!
Continue super soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: masam


You really think Twilight is capable of giving out any ideas 😆




Bloody ideas 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79


Bwahahaha! so true!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

The title drew me to this TS (I have heard off OS & SS) this was unique.

I have read on many must read compilations that are doing the rounds on the forum, about your work and stopped to read this. It is not surprising your writing comes highly recommended, will read the other stories you have written as and when I get time, do share your index, if you don't mind that is.

Coming to this piece, it's fluid and well written; one falls into the trap of giving too many details, this does not. A feature I liked, you want to tell a story and have started off with a lot of promise, waiting for the next instalment.

It would be safe to say your work will be sought out, keenly.

Kalyaani

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