Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE*

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pavi1

@pavi1

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow...awesome two shot...

thanks for the pm...

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Sanjana

@shona_sanju

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Thisis the second work ofurs M reading...frst "Change ofseasons"..nd nw this...AND m olready searching for ur INDEX...u r wonderful.

I loved Change of Seasons...nd m olready loving"Set Fire..."...🤗

his perfectly carved face in the most unreadable expression that even her small, white bar-coder would go silent on deciphering it

I chuckled on this description 😊...Sooo...APT...!!!!!

I reallly...really...want u to cntinue i t...!!! 👍🏼

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

whoa!!!! dat was brilliant!!!!! loved it!!!!

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

It s wonderful...pls write second part..

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

heya masam...😃😃

awesome update...looking 4wrd 4 d next part...😃😃

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

woah.. awesome.. masam.. you never disappoint me.. you have always a story that takes my breath away.. i so wish you re-start 'if only'.. your writing is so captivating...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Loved the concept...not too much said but still so much for conveyed! Very nice writing too. Thanks for the pm

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Arnav Singh Raizada...and STALKING?????😲

Haha...loved this!!!!

Khushi has managed to turn ASR into a stalker!!! 😆 Poor Khushi...she's terrified here...and intrigued at the same time!!! Who won't be??? Its ASR we're talking about!! 😉

Does he smoke...since he did buy cigarettes????

Looking forward to reading the next installment!!😳

Thanks for the pm!!! 🤗

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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rockingchamp

@rockingchamp

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

loved it...thnks for the pm...

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

C0ntinue s00n...it was s0 intruiging and funny!!! I l0ved this funny stalker and 0f c0urse 0ur little timid Khushi :D
The diference between the tw0 is s0 evident yet n0t s0 evident...It is really a fresh change