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Posted: 13 years ago
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QUOTE=lazyleaves]Res


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This is for the first time that I am reading a work of yours and I am already your fan :)

I loved the plot, the story is so intriguing. Surely Khushi has turned an established businessman to a stalker :-D

Her reaction is bang on! Anyone would get nervous under that gaze. Sigh!


Does he buy cigarettes because he smokes or is it just an excuse? If he smokes then he smokes a lot!

I have a complain. Why did you stop?

I have a question.
When are you posting the next part? I can be quite demanding ha :-D

Haha, I can see that!
I stopped writing because I had to. My fingers won't just move. Seriously. :/
And next part, tomorrow InshAllah :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Please continue...i love the connection!!
masam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: pinkss

HI Masam...

I just saw your post and jumped to read it ...Absolutely LOVED this OS, awww, Arnav the tycoon, stalking her, I'm glad he mustered some guts finally :) Cant wait to read more, will Khushi Ji go after her stalker ;)
waiting for the next part...
btw, I'm dying for an update of "IO" :(
when are you planning to update your blogs :|
Do reply if you can, no pressurizing though :)
tc, love
JIA


Hi Jia.
As you know 'IO' is on hiatus and a much as I hate to admit it, its updates are not going to be there for a while.
I'm probably much heartbroken than you are. 😭
lazyleaves thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
@masam: You better :-D when you say tomorrow, it doesnt mean 24 hours right?
SanzBarbie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
such a beautiful plot weaved with Magical words. U are an awesome writer. Thank u so much for the pm
sonia_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
the stalker part was scary but of course its arnav, so its all good, who cares about scary. Hehe
fanastic first chapter, do continue, I'm eager to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...arnav sooo cute...he is da staker...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
segad thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
better update soon. can't wait too long
sarunsashasingh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Nice d story is intresting, don't just make it a 2 shot, u can continuefurther!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
hey masam its awesm...unique cncept...loved it...
Thnx 4 da pm...
Well plx updt if only soon i m missing it..

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