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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

i am not gona res and leave...stop saying tht u know...feels kinda bad...but i do understnd ur feeling, it horrible to see a lonely res awaiting unres...

so wat shd i say awesome chapter...i just found it in the 1st page...so yep ran here...!!!

beautiful update!!!!

i love arnav point of views cos u write thm the best and love the way u describe his feelings!!!!!!!!!!!

superm writing!!!

waiting 4 more!!!!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Amazingly written Rae - Arnav's POVs I guess - very emotional one -

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Arshiarnav1741
i am not gona res and leave...stop saying tht u know...feels kinda bad...but i do understnd ur feeling, it horrible to see a lonely res awaiting unres...
so wat shd i say awesome chapter...i just found it in the 1st page...so yep ran here...!!!
beautiful update!!!!
i love arnav point of views cos u write thm the best and love the way u describe his feelings!!!!!!!!!!!
superm writing!!!
waiting 4 more!!!!

Thank You for your comment.

And about my note on the business of Res-ing, its not personally directed at you but at the general practice and I think as the writer, I get that prerogative to say that I do not appreciate Res-ing for spots if you arent going to edit it right there and then.

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

What the! Who made that banner? So scary! But looks good too :)

Chapter 1 was brilliant. I'm hooked! And now you'll have to update daily nahi toh 😈

I loved all the flashbacks. ALL.OF.THEM!

Arnav singh raizada who appears to be strong & ruthless is so weak & vulnerable. All the flashbacks made me cry. My heart goes out to him. That poor soul deserves love but life has been so cruel. He has suffered so much & the worst part is that he couldn't share his insecurities, his fears with anybody else. And when he got someone to share his pain with, life again snatched her away. Dammit! So beautifully written! Just Perfect!

So he didn't go to the altar or called off the wedding? *confused*

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

This is so heart wrenching. Do update soon.

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

fabulous work

speechless

the way u hav depicted loved it

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

oh wow! You went through a series of powerful flashbacks! I have a feeling this is what is going to happen on the show!

nicely done Ms. Rae!!

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

This update is painful. I am sure we are going to have some painful scenes coming up in the serial. I don't know if I can watch the pain in Arnav's eyes when the truth is told to him. Your description itself made it so teary for me. I am sure I can't stand it seeing in TV. Lovely SS. Thanks for the pm and update soon.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: emistry
oh wow! You went through a series of powerful flashbacks! I have a feeling this is what is going to happen on the show!

nicely done Ms. Rae!!

Thank You, Miss. Emistry. :)

And @bold, as mentioned in the note on Page 1, I will hurt someone if this happens on the show! LOL! Just get them married with no hang ups, CVs. *Scowls*