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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Awesome update. Read all the three chapters in one go and totally loved it. Thanks for the pm and update soon

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Muskaan. Sigh. One second I was smiling wistfully ( even though I knew it was a dream ) and the next I felt like crying (which is a lot worse than crying actually). My heart breaks for Arnav and I read the dream sequence, twice, and I can't get over the beauty of that scene.

Exquisite chapter Rae!

And I thought the last one was the best till date, but it just keeps getting better and better :D

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

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I'm crying..I'm literally crying today.

Arnav's dream was so cute, so adorable...just perfect. For a moment I thought that they actually had a baby & all but it was a dream.

Lovely chapter Rae. Arnav's helplessness, his desire to be with khushi, his dreams, everything was perfectly written.

I wonder where is khushi & the Raizadas? Will we get to read about their feelings too?

Continue soon!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 12 years ago

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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Such a hearttouching update...awesome..thnx for pm nd update soon:)

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Update was very nice

Arnav's dream felt so realy and beautiful

please continue soon

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Its marvelous Rae , the vision captured is absolutely stunning. I like the slow unravel. The depth of Arnavs feelings have been exhibited perfectly. Continue with this vigour of emotion.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

awesome update rae beautifully done loved the emotion very sad and heartfelt very heart breaking when he worked up and realized it was a dream thanks for the pm awesome and the problem is not you work but your page its giving trouble it took me five minutes to get the page to accept my like and 20 minutes to load the page and i tried from to different computer and homes and coming to comment well this is the third time i am posting

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago