IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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bushrayou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

seriously this story is breaking my heart...

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

This last chapter was so emotionally intense it had me in tears!!!!! Really beautifully written. Thank you

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esmeralda111

@esmeralda111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

I know what Arnav has done was really very bad but he is repenting...Can't Payal see that...she is accusing Arnav but what she has done for her sister...If Arnav had left her alone so had she... By dusting off her picture or by lighting diyas...he cannot be free of this charge...

I cried the 2nd time while reading ur FF...I hope little Khushi is Arnav's daughter...he has suffered enough, even God forgives one, who repents...so its a request to not snatch away the only hope Arnav has: DNA test should be positive...keeping my fingers'cross...😊

n Yes it was Awesome 👏

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

The pain the sorrow the grief that Arnav is going thru I would not in my wildest dream wish that to my worstest of the worst enemy from the darkest corner of the hell to go thru this emmens pain n grief that Arnav is going thru ... It feels so real the way you had described emotions of payal and Arnav both .. My heart was littrelly aching and paining when I was reading the part where Arnav had ask payal to when she sees khushi next time ' if it's not too much to ask for ..if she could tell khushi that not for a very long time just for thodi der ke liye if she could visit him too that ofcourse after th sister were done talking ' ooohhhmygoood. It was sooo painful
This Arnav you had created is broken beyond the word broken

But I do have question sooo ...did Arnav knew that khushi was pregnant and he still abandon her and his child and didn't even go to see her until she was done waiting for him

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

I cried bucketfuls reading this SS

Can't believe Khushi is dead,

Arnav deserved unhappiness after leaving Khushi, but he is like the living dead.

Is little Khushi his baby? If so how did Amrita have her?

Please PM me with updates

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

That was awesum 👏

Plz update d next part soon :)

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Anjali250194

@Anjali250194

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

this is so sad, i feel like arnav is truly repenting, which i felt there wasn't really enough of in the show, considering all he did to her.

i hope there is a happy ending though! the part where arnav asks payal to let khushi visit him too was heartbreaking and i loved payal's story about simran.

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Reserved. I hate how you keep pm-ing and I can't comment but I haven't yet caught up with perfection but .. very soon, promise :D

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soumee

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Wid d current news of bs leavin, such ffs will keep me goin on...plzzz dnt stop it...plzzz continue...awsum pdate...nplz pm me wen u do update...

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#710

How is it that you manage to wrench my heart in grief with each new update?

Just when I think it can't get any more sad, for the lack of a better word, you give a new update that leaves me weeping.

I think I've mentioned this before but I'll say it again. I love your Payal!

She is an ideal sister. Grieving the loss of a brave and strong willed girl that saved her marriage and gave her her daughter's surname.

Arnav. I don't have words to express my feelings towards him. On one side I feel a searing agony in the depths of my heart for this tormented and haunted man that is buried in guilt and loss and heartbreak. And on the other side I feel this indescribable rage at him for punishing Khushi for a fault that wasn't hers. For driving her to the edge of life. For killing her and her unborn child.

Navin, hats off hon! The portrayal you have for your characters, especially Payal and Arnav, is absolutely brilliant. And this story is a sheer masterpiece! Great work! Continue soon :)

Pria.

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