IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

i actually got choked while reading this part

it was so beautiful...i could feel arnav's pain today...

Loved the way you described it...fantastic update :)

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smithasrk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

"I asked if you see her, if she comes to you, because she won't come to me, Payal. During these past eight years, I haven't once had a dream about Khushi. I have not felt her around me. I have longed every night to see her face, even if it is in my dreams.
I have sat outside, awake night after night, in case she comes in the moonlight.
I have tried to sleep in complete darkness.
I have tried to sleep with all the lights on.
I have waited, in the cold, under her stars.
I have waited inside, under her favorite blanket.
I have thought of her and longed for her, for every moment of every day. Hoping for her visit, hoping to see her one more time.

She will not come to me, Payal. If it is not too much to ask, Payal...when you see her next, can you tell her to....not for a long time, but just....thori der ke liye,and, of course, once you two sisters are done spending time with each other... can you ask Khushi to come to me too?"

😭 that was heart breaking , no matter wht he did Thanks fro the pm Navin

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Ooo that was a brilliant update - way tooo emotional
Thx navin

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NK-sushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

OMG... i could sense the anguish in his voice..it brought tears to my eyes...wow that was soo heartfelt. You write incredibly beautifully!!

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Great update that was real heartbreaking when he asked Payal to ask her to visit him once made me want to cry for him. Cant wait for the next update.

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indeedisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

This story is just beautiful. At first I thought that it was a younger version of Arnav and he was falling in love with Khushi but then as the story went on, I realised that it was much more complicated than that. I love this concept. I really do wonder what's going on with both baby Khushi and our khushi. I really do hope that she's still alive, and that they will have a wonderful reunion in the end. I have this strange feeling that baby Khushi is Arnavs child but, it could go both ways. So many questions!!!
Please update soon and PM me when you do!!
Lots of love
Celiza xox

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Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

arnav, i feel so sorry for him. His words "thori der ke liye" broke my heart. Awesome update

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Im speechless after reading four very insightful updates... 👏👏

Very emotional and touching...

Arnav has truly and finally lost it, I some how see him holding onto Khushi as a last thread of hope for him to continue living. I LOVE how you've brought him down to a level where he now believe's in things he didn't, like how Khushi doesn't come in his dreams...

At first I thought Payal to be quiet harsh to Arnav, and then put myself into her shoes, and as much pity as I feel for Arnav, what she said was quite true... you pay for your mistakes and he is!

What do I say about little Mini-Khushi...she's just adorable. He uncanny resemblance to khushi must mean something ;) . I look forward to reading more and seeing how the story unfolds...

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Rekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

simply superb...!!!

totally emotional...

cant describe...realy heart touching...

made me cry...

especially d part wer he asks payal to ask kushi ifshe can come in her dreamz too...

update soon...!!!

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Sana Sultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

the last part where he asked payal to ask khushi to meet him..that was heart breaking💔😭😭it was really emotional😭😭👏update the next one soon dear😊