IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 70

that was emotional

i am crying here! your writing made me...

Beautifully written I loved how you write Payals parts in the chapter I thought it was amazing please update soon please.

Thanks for the pm x

m a masochist ..i read this part again to torture myself and cry. but then i wonder..he deliberately left khushi alone and pregnant after coming to da mandap and declaring so because her blood was tainted according y=to him. then he made no effort to talk to her knowing its not her fault and she is alone, carrying his child. THEN, when she left the city to die, she suddenly became good enuf to look for and now "her" child will not be punished for the sins of the mother like she was??

I had to remind myself thru out the update just how much khushi had suffered coz of Arnav to not allow myself to feel sorry for him. It was so difficult. His pain was palpable and so was payal's. his redemption is too far if ever present.

I truly felt sorry for Arnav... the whole Sacrifice that Arnav and Khushi made was for Payal's benefit.

This update was sooo painfully beautiful and poignant. Arnav's loss and grief was heartbreaking. I had hardened my heart against him after the last update describing Khushi's last months waiting for him and how he cancelled their wedding etc but when he was telling Payal about how Khushi will not come to him...I melted ...with grief for him.

Awesome update... From Payal's insitinct reaction to bandage his cut to his denying using Khushi's dupata for the purpose... Then Payal's own feelings for something used by Khushi. Each n every emotion n inner termoil of two person who loved the same person... Their ways to express n ways to love different but the extant was same. Oh my when he told her he waited n longed to see her n tried every possible way that might result in seeing Khushi in dreams was so heart wrenching ... Specially the plead can u ask her not for long thodi dair k liyay if she can come to me too the pain i cant express in words... Awesome u r too good in describing inner feelings.

Navin come on woman take us out of our misery here and tell us what Aman wanted to tell Arnav... With your stories we can't even guess what's gonna happen so plz plz update now.