IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

last chapter was so emotional... I cried feeling the emptiness, longing and pain of Arnav

love Payal of your ff and hope little khusi is his daughter...

please update soon

poonam

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Navin jiii I haven't had time to catch up but this is omg soon beautiful!

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Aparajita267

@Aparajita267

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

This is amazing & you are awesome writer. I had tears all the while reading this story. You captured all the emotions perfectly and Arnav's grief is heart-wrenching

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

I'm in tears after reading all these chapters at once (bad idea I know) its such a good story, and the way you've written shown the sadness the grieid of Payal and especially Arnav's. The bit coulf you get her to visit me was so damn emotional and goood!

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Kiyala

@kiyala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

really loved this whole story till now... waiting to read more... could you plz PM me when you next update...

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

dis z such n amazin stry..
dunno hw i got 2 read dis..
juz loved it..
it seems dt may b she met wid n accdent..n may b afta dt she must hav gone thru surgery or so..

i mean she must hav been injured badly..
sooo...her face n ol..
she must hav changed her identity..soo dt Arnav doesnt find her..
its pakka Khushi..she has changed her name,,
if d kid z Khushi..den Amrita(Khushi) z juz tryin 2 keep Khushi alive thru d kid..

d kid z totally Cc of KKG..soo needless to say..dt she's ASR's daughter..
myt b 4 Payal's sake..she neva came back..
bt she joined AR btq..2 b arnd Arnav..
2 c him evryday..
she's juz same..nt around n behind money..
she askd him nt 2 giv her daughter Gold..gfts..toys..etc..juz coz she's Khushi..no1 cn b selfless lyk her..

gud dt she neva cums in his dreams..
if he cud nt stand 4 her 8yrs ago..
he dsnt desrve Khushi..n d li'l Khushi..
i hope he cums 2 no soon dt dey r same..
d DNA report wud surely prov dt d li'l kid z his daughter..
i hope she speaks abt DM..Jalebis..Wt the..!!

sooo dt he realizs dt Amrita z nt sum Amrita bt Khushi..
oh M alrdy lovin dis stry in my 1st read..
lol

u havnt updted it since along tym?

hope yu doo it soon..n dooo pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛thnnxxx..:)😊😊

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zonera1

@zonera1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Wow wow!I am spechless with awe!How could a story b so beautiful and so ethereal!
I loved it more than I could tell u.
Loved Arnav feeling Khushi as his own and needs no DNA but when he wants to claim her then he gets a test done.
I beg U please update soon.
U r a gem of a writer.

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Navin you have to update this soon...pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

awww you made me cry.
broke my heart.

i love the way you write.
the old dupatta.. and payal's thoughts there... achingly tender, tugging at my heartstrings.
beautiful.
poetry in prose.
touched my heart.. filled it..
emptied out so fast, i'm mourning the loss.
i'm mourning for arnav.. the deep hurt, guilt.. and most of all, the loss...

payal's perspective was perfect. PERFECT.

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Finding you and yor index was the best thing that ever happened to me.

Thank you for all the swirling emotions, crazy tears and oh God, its kinda unbelievable, but my heart aches right now.

I wanted to stop. I wanted to stop so bad. It's made me cry, splintered my heart into a million pieces.

I'd rather Arnav died a hundred times over than live this kind of life. Payal's word...the fact that it was said in such a passive tone made it worse I guess. It cut deep-- Arnav really killed Khushi.

There is so much pain, it became a little too much for me...in a weird way I kinda hope that little Khushi is not his daughter, because true, why should he breathe freely when Khushi can't?

This is so painful, the abyss of agony that Arnav faces right now and the explanation about Simran's make made my heart burn.

Every word, so poignant, priceless and immaculate...thank you for the touching, moving story...for making me feel so much, without the descriptions being gory.

Update please.

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