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Sikala

@Sikala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow very expressive.Liked it very much.Especially explaining Khushi's position

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: fatprincess
What u give an ending like that and u ask whether or not to continue ? Damn right u r gonna continue gal ! Okay no i am begging u to 😭 . The writing was really nice and thanx for the pm plus hope for future PMs on this 😉 .

hahaha!!! don't worry!! i'll definitely continue... tomorrow's a sunday.. ive got nothing better to do than write things!!!! 😊

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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

u hv given me small heart attack..😃 but awsum update..

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adithyan

@adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow...what a start...plz pm the update..

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Its depressing!!!!!!!!! d wedding has to happen yaar, arnav can't just leave her at the alter!!!!!!!!!

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durba

@durba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Awww...that was really really good buddy 😊 Please PM me the next part and ya please try and save Khushi if possible??? Do PM me plsss 😊

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Its depressing!!!!!!!!! d wedding has to happen yaar, arnav can't just leave her at the alter!!!!!!!!!

arrey my story isnt abt the current track at all... i just said i was INSPIRED by it... but im not going to extend it, based on predictions... so chill!! :)😆

n abt the show... yeah. they shouldn't get separated...

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Usma55

@Usma55

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

please continue

how will the family cope now

hate shyam and arnav

why didnt he come

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

reserved for my comment...

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just read the update,and am back. . 😉
OMG!
first question to you,is this really your first s.s.?
its Damm good sweetheart. . .
you know,when a reader reads the story,and actually imagines the scenes as he/she reads,the writer is proved to be qualified . .
your fiction i read,and it was so touchy and emotional!
i got goose bumps when i read Khushi was shot. .
your a brilliant author. .and there were no loose end dear,its just perfect. .
to good.plz continue and pm me. .
😊
thanks for the pm . .

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago