SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

an awesome beginning... loved how you built up the tension and the climax left me speechless! what a piece of writing!

arnav trying to break through to a benumbed khushi was heart-wrenching... loved the way shyam's true face was revealed to everyone: his obsession finally broke all boundaries, physical and mental! khushi coming alive and being galvanised into action, seeing she was ab out to lose arnav really was a sight to behold... now want to know what dadi's reaction is to this whole tragedy... that last line was the most poignant and moving one: And then she smiled, content that he'd called out to her, before she missed that one last train.

Originally posted by: harsh_princess

omg thats beautiful.bt i swear i'l beat u up if u make sad ff

Originally posted by: -Siaa-

Ahh..that was a great twist at the end and the emotions were splendidly described!! Looking forward to the story :D