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Originally posted by: Maddy1270
an awesome beginning... loved how you built up the tension and the climax left me speechless! what a piece of writing!
arnav trying to break through to a benumbed khushi was heart-wrenching... loved the way shyam's true face was revealed to everyone: his obsession finally broke all boundaries, physical and mental! khushi coming alive and being galvanised into action, seeing she was ab out to lose arnav really was a sight to behold... now want to know what dadi's reaction is to this whole tragedy... that last line was the most poignant and moving one: And then she smiled, content that he'd called out to her, before she missed that one last train.
THANK you!!!!! you really made my day!!!!😊😊
Udne Ki Aasha
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