SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!)

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMFGGG, Masterpiece 😳

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: valeriesalvator
Well done love! The story is fantastic! I loved it, it was really raw and full of emotion, carry on with it! :D xx

thanks for commenting!!!! 😃 taareef ke liye shukriya!!!!😳

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violet-amster

@violet-amster

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

i guess u should continue!!!!

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kirthi

@kirthiarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow 😃 that was sooo nice yaar...👏

i loved khushi's shock in the beginning🥺, arnav's frustration n pain to get her back, and shyam revealing himself!!!

and i wud love to c anjali's reaction to this!!!! 😉 how she should feel sorry for getting back that b@*&^d back into rm!!!!😡

great storyline 😊 pls do continue 😊

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Gayatri

@gayakk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Nice update...

Thanks for the PM..

Good try

Write more

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Tht was AMAZING!!!

Plz cont soon :)

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: kirthiarshi
wow 😃 that was sooo nice yaar...👏
i loved khushi's shock in the beginning🥺, arnav's frustration n pain to get her back, and shyam revealing himself!!!
and i wud love to c anjali's reaction to this!!!! 😉 how she should feel sorry for getting back that b@*&^d back into rm!!!!😡
great storyline 😊 pls do continue 😊

thank you!!! n yes... i'll come to dat as well... 😊

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

That was reallly goood!!😃

Did he actually shoot in front of all those people??

Do continue!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

oh my god dont tell m she is dead
or something just as horrible man
so far so good
you had it all in this man
i for one would love it if you continue with this pls
cheers for pm
see ya again soon

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fatprincess

@fatprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

What u give an ending like that and u ask whether or not to continue ? Damn right u r gonna continue gal ! Okay no i am begging u to 😭 . The writing was really nice and thanx for the pm plus hope for future PMs on this 😉 .