FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 73

muaah🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Arrey you posted scene two while I was writing my comments for the first! 😆

Reserved for more comments and feedback after a while.

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That was what I mean my REDEMPTION! Did you see our KKG in action? No, then read this scene and you will see the fire and pain in her eyes. Way to go Khushi! The way she said what does it matter if I forgive you or not?! Can your conscience forgive yourself? Ooo! 😲 Greatwa response👏

And, what can I say about the elevator scene😆, it was pure ASR style 🤣
Bas, glad Khushi gave all what was burning inside her to him even thought Arnav must've felt like a thousand needle pricking his heart *hayyee* You know, I kinda expected him to get angry too (eg when he said YOU to Payal) but he didn't so phew!

it was awesome yaar

What an update...Khushi's mind would be now like a sky after the storm...Her anger,frustration all has been vented out...Thanks for the PM

wow she definitely gave arnav it back

wonderful update
loved it
khushi...let all her pain and hurt known to Arnav...like it

chap 14 scene 1
awesome part...
Arnav's reactions made me to laugh...

superlike... i wish apne serial mein bhi aisa hota 😲

He needs character growth. He still thinks she'll take him back just like that. He needs to grow up. But you're planning on it, aren't you? I can tell because of the way you planned out your entire story. A good writer gets an urge, plans it out to cover the loopholes and then writes it. I can tell you've done that. *I might be wrong*