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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Smitzy -- generally mood kharaab hai... aur kharaab kardiya ! Nice writing anyway ...

Now .. he has to make up to her ... hope she leads him on a nice dance!

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gauri

@GAURI29

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

wow amazing update
especially last line was awsome

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Go Khushi! Tell him what hell you went through. Yes, we would like you together in the end! But you get to decide the path. The path of redemption and repentance for Arnav. I swear this parallel universe of Arhi is so damn realistic, especially with the way you handled Dadi's exit, Shashi's operation and of course, Payal and Aakash's relationship!

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asr13

@asr13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Ramanchi !!!!!!

Main 3rd page pe hoon 😡, smitzy galat time pe update kiya ...par itna solid scene likha hai yaaar...rula diya yet another time ...

Uff Dhad Dhad was amazing , abhi tak ho rahi hai ...with goosebumps and the works 😛...how do you do it ya ...get ALL the right emotions out without saying much ...

I knew she'll say ki Arnav Singh Raizada apna vaada kaise bhul gaya ? I just knew it !

She is very touched that he thought she is hurt and thats why he came BUT will not show it, and will show her displeasure that he actually told her sister off ...Excellent !!!! That was so real ...so Khushi !!!!

BUT...and I say BUT ...

Jab humare parivar ki beijjati hui thi, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Jab humein mandap par akela chod ke chale gaye the, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Jab hamein rulaya tha, humara dil dukhaya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Jab humari Jeeji ko unke sasural se alag kar diya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Jab apni angoothi utar kar humse saar rishte khatam kar diye, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Jab humari zindagi se hamesha ke liye nikal jane ka vaada kiya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Tumne toh le li yaar !!!! I admit was very restless after Scene 1 with his I-am-ArnavSinghRaizada-attitude, and I know I was the on top of the list to see him grovelling...and grovelling big time 😃 that is ...but would you believe...abhi mujhe bura lag raha hai 😭 ...

No, I am NOT saying what Khushi's has done is wrong, maine toh thappad hi maarna tha aur wo bhi bahut pehle 😆 ...

And this is what I meant earlier when I said he doesn't even realise what damage he has caused, and to what extent ...can he ever redeem himself ?

Aap khud se poochiye, kya aap khud ko maaf kar sakte hain?

Hats off smitzy !!!!!!!!!👏 Heartwrenching, would be an understatement !!!! Simply amazing !!!!!

👏

xxx Group Hug xxx

PS - I dont seem to have those fancy emoticons like you lot ...bhay ? tells tells 😳

PPS - Agla update aaj hai ya Mahaepisode dikhaogi 😉 ?

Oh and can you label Scene 2 as Scene 2 darrling 😛😛

Edited by asr13 - 13 years ago

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

this is one of the best convo between arnav and khushi i have read so far in any ff...

loved it!!!!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Feeling sad for them I know he had really done wrong by her...but I know she loves him and will always do so and they will never be happy without each other...but he needs to realise that he can not keep dictating the term of their relationship...leaving her at the altar? So not sure how he is going to gain her trust and forgiveness! But they both suffer like this..so they have to be together!

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: asr13
Ramanchi !!!!!!

Main 3rd page pe hoon 😡, smitzy galat time pe update kiya ...par itna solid scene likha hai yaaar...rula diya yet another time ...

Uff Dhad Dhad was amazing , abhi tak ho rahi hai ...with goosebumps and the works 😛...how do you do it ya ...get ALL the right emotions out without saying much ...
I knew she'll say ki Arnav Singh Raizada apna vaada kaise bhul gaya ? I just knew it !

She is very touched that he thought she is hurt and thats why he came BUT will not show it, and will show her displeasure that he actually told her sister off ...Excellent !!!! That was so real ...so Khushi !!!!

BUT...and I say BUT ...
Jab humare parivar ki beijjati hui thi, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?
Jab humein mandap par akela chod ke chale gaye the, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?
Jab hamein rulaya tha, humara dil dukhaya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?
Jab humari Jeeji ko unke sasural se alag kar diya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?
Jab apni angoothi utar kar humse saar rishte khatam kar diye, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?
Jab humari zindagi se hamesha ke liye nikal jane ka vaada kiya tha, tab hamari chinta nahin hui aapko?

Tumne toh le li yaar !!!! I admit was very restless after Scene 1 with his I-am-ArnavSinghRaizada-attitude, and I know I was the on top of the list to see him grovelling...and grovelling big time 😃 that is ...but would you believe...abhi mujhe bura lag raha hai 😭 ...

No, I am NOT saying what Khushi's has done is wrong, maine toh thappad hi maarna tha aur wo bhi bahut pehle 😆 ...

And this is what I meant earlier when I said he doesn't even realise what damage he has caused, and to what extent ...can he ever redeem himself ?
Aap khud se poochiye, kya aap khud ko maaf kar sakte hain?

Hats off smitzy !!!!!!!!!👏 Heartwrenching, would be an understatement !!!! Simply amazing !!!!!
👏
xxx Group Hug xxx

PS - I dont seem to have those fancy emoticons like you lot ...bhay ? tells tells 😳

PPS - Agla update aaj hai ya Mahaepisode dikhogi 😉 ?

Oh and can you label Scene 2 as Scene 2 darrling 😛😛

And another dhaasu comment!😉

Aaah, yes smitzyy ne jaldi kar diya!

Yea, she was surprised a bit and touched that he showed up just for her after all that has happened, but yea this time she vowed to be strong and not fall for his charms again!

Yaar...it always confusing who to support.
Dono ko dekhkar bura lagta hai...for one sec im supporting Khushi and the other Arnav!

Group hug🤗
Hahahaa...lol abhi se reserve!😆

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

My heart is doing dhak dhak...After such a bitter truth...is she going to forgive Arnav? She has a bigger heart after all!!!!

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ss2012

@ss2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

I like fiery Khushi. You go girl , give him hell at least for a little while before you succumb to his charms. As always like the update and already waiting for next one.