FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 71

Originally posted by: smitzy

hahahaha I waited and waited and then I left to write the next scene 😆

I tell you it's like my life is revolving only around this fic hehehehe DHAASU comment maara hai boss! dil garden garden ho gaya! Payaliya ke guts dekhe! She's grown some b*lls (not in the gross way) haha

Arnav is clueless about what is happening with Khushi.. he'll be struck speechless several times because he'll not see the suljhi hui seedhi saadhi Khushi that he had been trodding around for so long. Nope, no chance.. he'll face the lioness!

haan I know ICU wala dialogue was heavy.. but he needs to realise he has caused her lot of pain.. he has caused her pain in every way that a man can hurt a woman, emotionally, physically (referring to the man handling) psychologically. Khushi is a scarred woman and it will take lots of tender love and care to heal her (not sure if she will be healed at all).

shaadi wala scene hahaha I didn't think of it before, but now that you mention it, I can think of a way to slip it to Sanaka Devi to make her more mad at ASR 😆

abhi to agle update ke liye wait karo darling 😉

PS- You and Shwetha are two awesome stalkers muaaah ! kissy wissy to both of you! 🤗

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hi smitzy;

Thanks for the long scene. I was very happy to keep reading without feeling that I was being shortchanged.

I just loved the way she cut him off to say he was not part of the family - much like he had said to her, in not too many words!

I think it's very clever of you to show us how selfish Arnav is where his emotions are concerned. He's still only thinking of himself rather than her, after all that has happened. Amazing! Does he ever think about her?? Or what she wants, what she feels? I do hope this is not it. There has got to be a more explosive scene and meeting between them, right? I can't wait for the great confrontation. The prequel to it was a kinda like the calm before the storm. Not much she can do in the hospital anyway.

Wow! I hope you make him pay big time for what he did to Kushi!

You've kept us hanging for what's to happen next. I can't wait for the next update! Hopefully, we'll get a dhamaka!

I realize that my comments always only focus on Arnav and Kushi. I'm not ignoring your other characters, it's just that I only think about how Kushi and Arnav are going to get together and become one!

Thanks for the update and PMing me. 😃

Originally posted by: adddhan

Interesting update! Pls never let Khushi compromise her self dignity ! A good fighter she is ! Aur use Arnav ki akal thikane par hi lane do!

Originally posted by: ipkfan38

Wonderful Smitzy, thanks for the PM and a special thanks for writing both in English and Hindi. I understand Hindi very well, but when its written with the English script, it is a little difficult to read. So I really appreciated the English version. Thank you so much for taking the trouble!
wonderful story and it is at the correct pace... looking forward to more from you.

Poor Arnav...hoping the misunderstanding gets cleared and we have lovely Arhi scene next

Originally posted by: ayshaomar

glad that the surgery was successful

and it was funny arnav accussing payal and she gathered the courage to answer him back, cuz she was right she never said khushi was in the ICU he just assumed and didnt listen, guess she only got the courage after all he has done to khushi

i liked the fact that khushi put her foot down with arnav as he did do mean things to her, and so he should get it back now

and what a sly arnav talking his way around the doctor to get info and it worked too LOL

Originally posted by: angie_g82

So my husband thinks I'm crazy to go through FF's when I'm free let along watch the serial.. Plus we are from Sri Lanka. Oh who cares... LOVED the update.