SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awesome update

wanna read more so update asap

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Yogini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Alcohal & hot gals . . . . . . Jitne totake karne hai kar le . . . . . Sharon mind se nhi jayegi 😈
lolzz . . . . Blonde is confused & so as recky 😆
sharon is waitress at the same place 😈
swayam ki to dil ki tamanna puri ho gyi 😉
date wid u . . . . . 😛
sharon ko to mini - heart attack hi aa gya hoga 😆
flirty . . . . . Its not easy to impress her 😃

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Nisha this one was mindblowing!!!!

I am in love with your FF.

Although Swayam in your FF is a casanova, I actually like him, reason he is not able to head Sharon out of his head. We see a small glimpse of Swayam that we all know. Well his bumptious and overweening behaviour gets on nerves, but I loved it how Sharon handles him.

Bhav bhi nahi deti usko😆

Way to go girl.

Please update soon pretty please.

PS: Sorry for not commenting on your updates, had exams. I mean I still have them😒 But I do read your updates

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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

swaym casanova ho ya one woman man ho i alwayz like to read abt him & it was also awsom update
waiting for swaron's some good & romentic scenes
nice update
Thanx for pM

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Hey nisha first of all i am very sorry for being late in reading and commenting on this wornderful update of yours...sorry hai bahot bad kan pakad ke..hehehe...

Nisha my god what an update you gave...have you ever tried to sneak peak in a casinova's brain because man you really are awesome in describing casinova i must say this...
There is an essential character of a casinova that if a girl ditches him for a date than that girl has like hit his confidance for a world of good and he unknowingly becomes passionate to cash in that girl...here you have exectly depicted that very well or i say swayam ko perfectly casinova dikha diya hai...

waise ek baat bata muje tere os mein swayam ki nazar ki kharab hai kya ek low cut shirt wali blonde jispe asani se koi bhi drool kar jaye wo ek casinova type ke bande ko not so happening lagi...anyways mere ko na vo vicky ki line badi achi lagi ke vicky ne use bola from when did it made difference to you that a girl is easy catch or difficult...hahahahah i was smiling like hell maine soch vicky ye punch line line of the update honi chaiye but muje kya pata tha padte waqt ke abhi sharon ka amzing pov ane wala hai...

and dhan tanain here comes the sharon pov for you hahahah sharon saw swayam and got shocked that what was he doing there stalking or what was really sweet type of monologue but man my man when swayam offered her a date and said i wanted a coffee but now i want something else and here comes my line of the update " I had the sudden urge to kick him in the balls" i was taken by thunder because i just imagined what if sharon tells him on the face and how swayam will look up to her...it was damm funny man i loved it...after that whole sharon pov was fun to read i just loved the sharon pov in the update most...

and man sharon new her behaviour of this kind was hurting a dent in mr. casinova's mind so it seems cool to note that sharon is trying to outsmart this cool casinova here...the story is really getting exciting now...

loved the update...thanks for pm...

Regards

Pratik...

P.S. acha nisha ye update actually kab due tha and kab aaya hai...ab gin le aaj se 3 din ke bad i will start bugging for an update because i cannot wait to read the third part of this story..hahahah..and for now enough because ye teri upadate se zyada badi comment ho gayi hahahaha...aur is zyada pratik bak bak bak ke liye update more and have fun of pratik bak bak bak heheh...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: pratik54000
Hey nisha first of all i am very sorry for being late in reading and commenting on this wornderful update of yours...sorry hai bahot bad kan pakad ke..hehehe..

.gandi baat sorry bolte waqt has rahe ho,pata chal raha hai,kitna sorry feel kar rahe ho

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
have you ever tried to sneak peak in a casinova's brain

hum taak-jhak karne vale logo main se nahi hain

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
There is an essential character of a casinova that if a girl ditches him for a date than that girl has like hit his confidance for a world of good and he unknowingly becomes passionate to cash in that girl...

itna confidence...aapko kaise pata?😈

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
waise ek baat bata muje tere os mein

chindi size n tukdo mai update deti hu.
.par aise mere ff ko os to mat bolo.
.merse update nikalvana aapke bas ki baat nh h😆
btw thanx for the luvly comment😃

Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: cuteswayu
.gandi baat sorry bolte waqt has rahe ho,pata chal raha hai,kitna sorry feel kar rahe ho are hasi ko chod feelings dekh sahi me sorry hun yar hum taak-jhak karne vale logo main se nahi hain acha fir ek casinova ki itni detailing kahan se aayi itna confidence...aapko kaise pata?😈 bacha bhul mat mai ek ladka hun aur mere group me bhi casinova's ho sakte hai chindi size n tukdo mai update deti hu...are ab vo teasers ho gaye hai😛😛
.par aise mere ff ko os to mat bolo...acha baba ye galti kan pakad ke manta hu sorry
.merse update nikalvana aapke bas ki baat nh h😆 acja bacha to ab jab tak tera update nahi aayega mere ff bhi update nahi hoga...ab mat kar update who cares meri efforts bach jayegi ek update likhne ki
btw thanx for the luvly comment😃 and pleasure is always mine

Hey nisha i am very gald that you liked the comment...and thanx for replying it...

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
hasi ko chod feelings dekh sahi me sorry hun yar

pc ki screen se kisi ki feelings dekhna merko nahi aata,aapko aata hain to sikha do!

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
acha fir ek casinova ki itni detailing kahan se aayi

jaha se aapko apne ff mai sharon ki feelings samajh aati hai

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
bacha bhul mat mai ek ladka hun aur mere group me bhi casinova's ho sakte hai

aap bhi to unme se hi ek ho

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
ja bacha to ab jab tak tera update nahi aayega mere ff bhi update nahi hoga...ab mat kar update who cares meri efforts bach jayegi ek update likhne k

maine kb kaha i wil nt update,maine kaha aapke bug karne se nh karungi,apne man se karungi

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
are ab vo teasers ho gaye hai

aapke jitni achi writer nahi hu,ek baar mai utna hi aya dimag m..to m kya karu.

Originally posted by: Pratik54000
acha baba ye galti kan pakad ke mantahu sorry

jao maaf kia

Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Nehal92
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BAS ITNA HI!! nish i want to read more..
nish tu ready reh..ab main tere dimaag kahungi update ke liye!!0„2
update toh hamesha ki tarah mindblowing tha0„2

Nehal dear mujhe bhi bada comment chahiye
thanku!

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: marauder
I'm here before the PM🤡
Well coming to the update. Just awesome. This FF is getting better and better by each update. Swayam's character as a casanova is the best one I ever read in any FF, SS or OS so far. His entire casanova image was just brilliantly written again in this update. And gald to see the whole gang is here and they are basically the same awesome friends we knew.
And what to say abot SwaRon second meet. Its even better and even superbly penned than the first. Swayam's cheekness and flirtness and Sharon's stubberness. Nice combo. Waiting for some serious explosions in next update.

Thanku so much shishir...😃

Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago