SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Nish as per me this is the best update to the FF so far. Loved how you are shaping up Swayam's character. His thoughts on how to score a chick, what do i say..spot on..you wrote that part very well. The whole gang was the same friends we know and made a perfect addition to the update. The SwaRon meet was just superb..both their reactions and how Sharon reminded him of the previous night and how Swayam tried flirting with his charm trying to hide the disappointment from Sharon each reply was nicely done.Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks sudha..
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tanuka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

NISHA 🤗

i am sorry for the late comment .

coming to the update -

It was amazing !!

very well written

you are an awesome writer and with every update , this FF gets more and more interesting.

totally loved the update , swayam the typical casanova and sharon the strong headed girl .

I had a real good time reading this.

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the PM.

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Res

ITNA HI???????????????😡

how dare u??????????????

Nish hat mein aja mere tu...pitegi tu!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆

Update ka kya kehana...

Kya Bat!!!!!!!

Kya Bat!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kya Bat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Edited by Karen_sharon - 12 years ago

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Tania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Hey nish, meli pyali behna...hugs...fab update tha...and really its fun to read swayam in such an avtar!!! waiting for the next one sweetie...love di..;)

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ABI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

I love how much Sharon has already affected Swayam !! And Go Sharon for playing hard to get with Swayam !! He's gotta work way harder to get a date with Sharon !!

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

sorry for commenting so late Nish
coming to the update-what an update!!Swayam is just so hawtt and irrestible here!!iim loving his character here..a bad boy everyone is going to love!
Sharon is just perfect for him I guess!!bechara his "mystery girl" is being all stubborn and he is becoming restless!!waiting eagerly for the next update!really looking forward to it.

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lalita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

awesome update

awww swayam thinking abt sharon

n sharon not wanting to tell her name😆

continue soon

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Chapter 4
**Sharon's p.o.v**
On Saturday afternoon I glanced at my watch, seven o'clock, I had an hour until I had to meet Sameer. I roamed around the mall, window shopping, and spotted a few dresses I liked but they were way out of my price range, and to be honest I didnt really need them.
I was roaming around in the mall when a poster caught my eye, I stared at it and instantly recognized the five familiar faces from SSDC. I looked at their faces and thought about what everyone saw in them. The black haired one was quite good looking, I had to admit, but nothing special. To me they all just looked like normal boys. I thought back to my meeting with Swayam and to his cockiness, he surely didnt think he was a normal boy.

Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

I started walking out, still thinking of Swayam. I don't know what it was about him. Maybe it was how he tried to flirt with me even though I was sending him death glares or how cocky he was but he just made my blood boil, and it seemed like he never wanted to leave my thoughts - which was quite annoying since he wasn't exactly my favorite person . He thought he could do anything just because he was famous, leave that: He thought he could get any girl just because he was famous.
For a moment I felt kind of bad for him: What kind of people must he be surrounded with to think that way? But just as quickly as I had the thought, I brushed it aside. I shouldn't blame the people around him, I don't even know them. It was all Swayam. He was just cocky. I didn't think he was bad looking. I mean even I have to admit he is... Decent looking... But that still doesn't give him the right to be so arrogant! I didnt feel pity for swayam shekhawat..

Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

H e was annoying. . I knew what that kind of boys were like: They use you and leave you, these kind of boys just Piss. Me. Off.
I had lost track of time thinking about Swayam, and I had to meet sammy in five minutes, so I rushed to the cinema and found him waiting for me. U are late again ms sharon rai Prakash! He exclaimed when he saw me and I gave him a bear hug as an apology and we headed for the ridiculously long queue. We walked up to the ticket counter to get our tickets for kal ho na ho..[Sam's fvrt movie]

Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago