SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

I was sitting at Starbucks watching the waitress. It was such a nice view. I could only see her from the back but it was enough for me to see she was hot.Her long black hair fell onto her back and reached just above her well-shaped behind. She flipped it and I finally got a view of her face. And I just couldnt believe it. It was the same mystery girl
**Sharons POV**
I handed the two costumers their receipt and watched them move away. It was a couple and as I looked down to put the money in the cashier I couldnt help thinking about how good they looked together, and how lucky they were. Without looking up I asked the next costumer What would you like?
A date with you. answered a painfully familiar voice.
. My head shot up and I looked straight into those big brown eyes and cheeky grin. Great. He looked me up and down, once again as he had the previous night and smiled. I wondered if he was stalking me, but quickly brushed off the idea as I knew it was stupid

Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

I wanted a coffee, but now I think Ive set my eyes on something else.
He told me and I had the sudden urge to kick him in the balls. Of course, I had torestrain myself as I was at my workplace, and because I am generally a pacifist. Instead I decided to ignore him and tell the next costumer to take his order. Sadly Swayam decided to ignore me too, and did not move an inch.
I didnt catch your name last night.said swayam
Thats probably cause you were too busy knocking me over. I reminded him.
So are you going to tell me now? He asked me once he realized his pick up line hadnt worked.
Not a chance. I told him smiling coolly.
Why? He asked keeping just as calm, but I knew that this was killing him from the inside.
Because I dont tell strangers my name, especially cocky, arrogant ones like you.
I watched his jaw drop a little before he quickly recomposed himself, and felt a smile spread over my own face.

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Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago

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Nehal92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

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BAS ITNA HI!! nish i want to read more...

nish tu ready reh..ab main tere dimaag kahungi update ke liye!!

update toh hamesha ki tarah mindblowing tha

Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

WOW...meri jaaan...what an update...that was so...ummm...DIFFERENT...UNIQUE...still sooo SWARONLICIOS...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

i loved swayam's feelings...he kissed that blonde to forget his mystery girl...but she was too easy for him...unlike our stubborn n strong headed sharon... awww...hot swayam doing hot -harqatein ...loving this flirty...Casanova...multi-women man swayam...& sharon...her answers were like bullets ...which were hurting his big fat EGO...and he asked for a date...😆😆 I wanted a coffee, but now I think Ive set my eyes on something else. this swayam is so much fun...loving it...this FF is going to be one HOT thing..with so much fire in both of them...thanx swthrt for keeping my request n continuing this FF ..waiting for the next part...plz update soon ...luv u..😊

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

I'm here before the PM 🤡
Well coming to the update. Just awesome. This FF is getting better and better by each update. Swayam's character as a casanova is the best one I ever read in any FF, SS or OS so far. His entire casanova image was just brilliantly written again in this update. And gald to see the whole gang is here and they are basically the same awesome friends we knew.
And what to say abot SwaRon second meet. Its even better and even superbly penned than the first. Swayam's cheekness and flirtness and Sharon's stubberness. Nice combo. Waiting for some serious explosions in next update.

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Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Nish as per me this is the best update to the FF so far. Loved how you are shaping up Swayam's character. His thoughts on how to score a chick, what do i say..spot on..you wrote that part very well. The whole gang was the same friends we know and made a perfect addition to the update. The SwaRon meet was just superb..both their reactions and how Sharon reminded him of the previous night and how Swayam tried flirting with his charm trying to hide the disappointment from Sharon each reply was nicely done.

Looking forward to the next update.

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sukanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

nish yaar it is a supercool update, i loved every moment of it. Haila nil asking amar to carry him😆, teri update be teri jaise he hai, bindasss😆 Yaar swayam tho ek dum hawttt hai, no wonder he is crazy of the mystry girl, they are soul mates so def their hearts will find them. Wow what an update, yaar but ithna chottu, tu be na yaar thoda lamba kar diya kar, nish jaanu it is the best and you are an awesome writer.